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2/6/2008 c1 samrarhuasa
I like it. :]

I have one suggestion. You may or may not like it, but I'll give it up anyhow.

There were tears in his eyes and there was the single tear one his cheek. I think it would add more of an impact if you connected the two a bit more by making both either singular or plural?

But that's just my idea. The story was great.

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