for Identity4/3/2016 c33 SlashLover
I get that Cass is going through some emotional stuff, but he's just a fucking asshole.
I get that Cass is going through some emotional stuff, but he's just a fucking asshole.
4/3/2016 c17 SlashLover
Just for anatomy clarification, it would be nearly impossible to throw up a meal you ate nearly 24 hours previously. Each meal only stays in the stomach 3-6 hours before moving to the intestines. So he could have puked up lunch, MAYBE breakfast if he'd eaten it really late, but not dinner from the night before.
Just for anatomy clarification, it would be nearly impossible to throw up a meal you ate nearly 24 hours previously. Each meal only stays in the stomach 3-6 hours before moving to the intestines. So he could have puked up lunch, MAYBE breakfast if he'd eaten it really late, but not dinner from the night before.
11/22/2015 c34 
1quayjahn
Mahhh, don't end here... I want to know, how it continues! I hope you find your muse again and start to continue. Good luck
1quayjahnMahhh, don't end here... I want to know, how it continues! I hope you find your muse again and start to continue. Good luck
3/7/2015 c1 chocovic-chu
Almost three years after I left my previous review, I started rereading this intriguing story and daaamn I'm still rooting for Keegan/Cass . . . ! Why, please update; I'm so desperate!
Keegan dearest was a brilliant guy and I wanna know more about him! What his real feeling was like for Cass and I even plot some random after-story about him and Cass dating and all lovey-dovey before Keegan dearest's graduation . . . but it looks kind of fake or like just my wish-fullfillment for my OTP of this story . . .
And I like Cass; his cynical voice was alluring when he's all narrating his life, so please keep Cass' voice alive by writing the next chapter if you still have intention to continue writing . . .
Anyway, desperate request aside, thanks for sharing! You are a brilliant author! You inspire me, dear Ms. Rayne Auster!
Almost three years after I left my previous review, I started rereading this intriguing story and daaamn I'm still rooting for Keegan/Cass . . . ! Why, please update; I'm so desperate!
Keegan dearest was a brilliant guy and I wanna know more about him! What his real feeling was like for Cass and I even plot some random after-story about him and Cass dating and all lovey-dovey before Keegan dearest's graduation . . . but it looks kind of fake or like just my wish-fullfillment for my OTP of this story . . .
And I like Cass; his cynical voice was alluring when he's all narrating his life, so please keep Cass' voice alive by writing the next chapter if you still have intention to continue writing . . .
Anyway, desperate request aside, thanks for sharing! You are a brilliant author! You inspire me, dear Ms. Rayne Auster!
2/19/2015 c1 Guest
7yrs later..
(Update pls QQ)
7yrs later..
(Update pls QQ)
2/12/2013 c17 Guest
frustration and academic frustration
frustration and academic frustration
10/13/2012 c34 o
Whaaaat? I could have sworn.I double checked that it was complete before I started it... Whhhhhhy? ): I know it has been years but more please?
Whaaaat? I could have sworn.I double checked that it was complete before I started it... Whhhhhhy? ): I know it has been years but more please?
8/30/2012 c5 RueRue1396
well i found the little guy comment funny. am reading this rather late seeing as the book was possibly 4 years ago but i have liked it so much that the possibility of the author never reading the comment hasn't deterred me from expressing how much i have liked it despite the rather unusual topic "intersex" guess i am really naive
well i found the little guy comment funny. am reading this rather late seeing as the book was possibly 4 years ago but i have liked it so much that the possibility of the author never reading the comment hasn't deterred me from expressing how much i have liked it despite the rather unusual topic "intersex" guess i am really naive
6/30/2012 c34 12Wolf Puppy
This was such an amazing read! It's funny, dramatic, and complex characters. I love it! 3 I hope you get around to updating soon :D
12Wolf PuppyThis was such an amazing read! It's funny, dramatic, and complex characters. I love it! 3 I hope you get around to updating soon :D
6/26/2012 c4 Sarah
this story is really hard for me to fathom because it's like it disregards the entire existence of transsexualism. If she was a girl in every way except for her body being slightly more male, why would they make her go through a sex change to male? Why wouldn't they just change her to female? The story is written like she is a gay man with girl-ish tendancies when she IDENTIFIES as a female. It's really strange.
this story is really hard for me to fathom because it's like it disregards the entire existence of transsexualism. If she was a girl in every way except for her body being slightly more male, why would they make her go through a sex change to male? Why wouldn't they just change her to female? The story is written like she is a gay man with girl-ish tendancies when she IDENTIFIES as a female. It's really strange.
3/31/2012 c34 7The Original Psycho
Arrrrgh, so frustrating! Read all this today and only just realised it wasn't complete :( I know you haven't updated this since 2008, but please do :] Love it!
7The Original PsychoArrrrgh, so frustrating! Read all this today and only just realised it wasn't complete :( I know you haven't updated this since 2008, but please do :] Love it!
2/26/2012 c29 chocovic-chu
so, you started to reveal the story in the past... aric sweetheart was trully in love with shayne honey who ever loved keegan dearest who seemed to have a thing (love, hopefully) for our sorta damsel in distress cass who had just realized that (s)he loved to kiss keegan dearest only... WOW.
well, the story was so far so good and vic loves all the parts containing keegan/cass hints cuz vic has supported them pairing since the very second chappie~
vic loves keegan dearest so much! his character captivated vic's heart before cass' did, and vic really really hope they will be together in the end of story...
but, consider it has been 3 years you haven't update it yet, does vic have to put her hope away for keegan/cass couple?
she means, vic has her head over heels loving this unique yet awesome fiction of yours but you stop writing it on? oh, why?
still, vic hopes you will do continue it soon... just, don't hang your readers that way, please...
anyway, has vic said that your story about that kind of intersexuality was so awesome briliantly? not yet? well, your story's so briliant awesomely indeed~ vic loves, loves it till then!
so, you started to reveal the story in the past... aric sweetheart was trully in love with shayne honey who ever loved keegan dearest who seemed to have a thing (love, hopefully) for our sorta damsel in distress cass who had just realized that (s)he loved to kiss keegan dearest only... WOW.
well, the story was so far so good and vic loves all the parts containing keegan/cass hints cuz vic has supported them pairing since the very second chappie~
vic loves keegan dearest so much! his character captivated vic's heart before cass' did, and vic really really hope they will be together in the end of story...
but, consider it has been 3 years you haven't update it yet, does vic have to put her hope away for keegan/cass couple?
she means, vic has her head over heels loving this unique yet awesome fiction of yours but you stop writing it on? oh, why?
still, vic hopes you will do continue it soon... just, don't hang your readers that way, please...
anyway, has vic said that your story about that kind of intersexuality was so awesome briliantly? not yet? well, your story's so briliant awesomely indeed~ vic loves, loves it till then!
1/31/2012 c34 Lea
You... You're leaving it like that? D: talk about late to the party! I started this yesterday and it doesn't look like you'll be updating :( can you change the summary to indicate that you've given up on it? I'd hate to see others this disappointed.
Anyway, I suppose next time I should just pay attention to the 'updated' date, or something. It's always upsetting when an author abandons their story.
Sorry, I'd leave a signed review but my laptop is spazzing atm, so I'm using my phone and it doesn't like fictionpress :/
Love me xx
You... You're leaving it like that? D: talk about late to the party! I started this yesterday and it doesn't look like you'll be updating :( can you change the summary to indicate that you've given up on it? I'd hate to see others this disappointed.
Anyway, I suppose next time I should just pay attention to the 'updated' date, or something. It's always upsetting when an author abandons their story.
Sorry, I'd leave a signed review but my laptop is spazzing atm, so I'm using my phone and it doesn't like fictionpress :/
Love me xx