for Melody of a Broken Heart4/10/2008 c1 
30Preston2099
A little on the touchy-feely side, but nevertheless, its gets the point across with dramatic effect; very intresting. Although I havent gotten the chance to read most of your works im afraid, this deffientely gives me the incentive too.
The main reason as to why I enjoy it is because you really do try to give reason and explaination as to why you write; something most writers rarely do. So I say kudos for putting yourself out there.
-Preston
30Preston2099A little on the touchy-feely side, but nevertheless, its gets the point across with dramatic effect; very intresting. Although I havent gotten the chance to read most of your works im afraid, this deffientely gives me the incentive too.
The main reason as to why I enjoy it is because you really do try to give reason and explaination as to why you write; something most writers rarely do. So I say kudos for putting yourself out there.
-Preston
4/5/2008 c1 nyah21
its deep and emotional...i felt the honesty and the hope and...ur good..keep it up
its deep and emotional...i felt the honesty and the hope and...ur good..keep it up
2/24/2008 c1 3Adaku
Wow- this is inspiring. Very nice. I have no words to describe this. I'm sorry you're leaving here. :(
adakua
3AdakuWow- this is inspiring. Very nice. I have no words to describe this. I'm sorry you're leaving here. :(
adakua
2/1/2008 c1 barely there baby
i love this.
the feelings you describe are all to familiar..
but they make things colorful.
i love this.
the feelings you describe are all to familiar..
but they make things colorful.
2/1/2008 c1 256Amandriella Peetrifica
Wow. This is the first piece I've read from you... but now I simply MUST go through the rest of your writings! Your words are weaved in such an intriguing, alluring, honest and real style.
Some of which you said, sounded so much like me, it just drew in my curiosity even more, further fueling my need to read the rest of what you've written.
I'm glad you have the heart of a writer, and will continue to write your emotions! I want...need.. to read more from you. Writing is by far the best when it is filled with honest emotions, and that's what yours sound to be filled with. You have no idea how glad I am that I read this, haha.
Please, do not ever give up the hope for finding love. You deserve, and I'm postive will find, love. Someone that can match your melody with a way to fix your broken heart, even (if that's what you want, anyway?). Thank you for this glorious story. Best of luck and fun times to come, I hope, for you on your journey to anothers' heart!
256Amandriella PeetrificaWow. This is the first piece I've read from you... but now I simply MUST go through the rest of your writings! Your words are weaved in such an intriguing, alluring, honest and real style.
Some of which you said, sounded so much like me, it just drew in my curiosity even more, further fueling my need to read the rest of what you've written.
I'm glad you have the heart of a writer, and will continue to write your emotions! I want...need.. to read more from you. Writing is by far the best when it is filled with honest emotions, and that's what yours sound to be filled with. You have no idea how glad I am that I read this, haha.
Please, do not ever give up the hope for finding love. You deserve, and I'm postive will find, love. Someone that can match your melody with a way to fix your broken heart, even (if that's what you want, anyway?). Thank you for this glorious story. Best of luck and fun times to come, I hope, for you on your journey to anothers' heart!
2/1/2008 c1 3Ash of The Wind
Such is the way of a writer. We take things that happen in our lives and around us and find a way turn convert them into words on paper. Great writing and inspiration can come out of bad times (or good times for that matter). If you can do that then I think that seperates a great writer from just so bozo who likes to type.
3Ash of The WindSuch is the way of a writer. We take things that happen in our lives and around us and find a way turn convert them into words on paper. Great writing and inspiration can come out of bad times (or good times for that matter). If you can do that then I think that seperates a great writer from just so bozo who likes to type.