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2/3/2008 c1 15Sahara Hayden
This was very touching.

One thing I noticed though was the line:

"Longing to hole me"

I'm pretty sure you meant "hole" to be "hold", so you might want to change that.

Otherwise, this was a very nice poem. Keep up the good work!
2/3/2008 c1 22lost for words
so sweet. I'm sorry for your loss. Nice work.

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