for True Love
25/13/2008 c2 Nakigoe Ketsurui
Oh my god, you better continue this :D It's so cute!
Oh Imma read that next, lol.
If you think that's disturbing, try reading the story 'Affliction' -in my Fanfic. faves- while listening to the song 'Hospital' by The Used. THAT is disturbing enough to make me cry.
Naki-chan
My Name is Rikku
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
As a wonderful gift.
Just for you.
Oh my god, you better continue this :D It's so cute!
Oh Imma read that next, lol.
If you think that's disturbing, try reading the story 'Affliction' -in my Fanfic. faves- while listening to the song 'Hospital' by The Used. THAT is disturbing enough to make me cry.
Naki-chan
My Name is Rikku
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
As a wonderful gift.
Just for you.
5/13/2008 c1 Nakigoe Ketsurui
I have a best friend named Alyssa! You reminded me how much it would hurt to lose any of my friends... I'm too weak without them. Very sad, and very nice.
(Plz call me Rikku-chan, lol. I prefer it cuz it just makes things easier.)
Naki-chan
My Name is Rikku
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
As a wonderful gift.
Just for you.
I have a best friend named Alyssa! You reminded me how much it would hurt to lose any of my friends... I'm too weak without them. Very sad, and very nice.
(Plz call me Rikku-chan, lol. I prefer it cuz it just makes things easier.)
Naki-chan
My Name is Rikku
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
As a wonderful gift.
Just for you.
2/4/2008 c2 Mel
This moved way too fast...with a lot more detail and emotion to the text, you could have spread the plot out over, like, ten more chapters. Also, there were a few grammar mistakes- perhaps you'd consider finding a beta-reader..? Also, each time someone else is speaking, you MUST start a new paragraph. You'll get more reviewers this way, and will come off as a more credible author.
This moved way too fast...with a lot more detail and emotion to the text, you could have spread the plot out over, like, ten more chapters. Also, there were a few grammar mistakes- perhaps you'd consider finding a beta-reader..? Also, each time someone else is speaking, you MUST start a new paragraph. You'll get more reviewers this way, and will come off as a more credible author.