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10/25/2008 c1 lymli
No sound like a drum

I like that sentence a lot since it's not kinda cliche.
5/13/2008 c1 Nakigoe Ketsurui
I hope nothing makes you go back to being that upset again, Dimunda-chan.

Naki-chan

My Name is Rikku

And I Cry these Tears Of Blood

As a wonderful gift.

Just for you.
3/13/2008 c1 5KatieTheWriter
Beautifully written poem! Good job :-)
2/4/2008 c1 460Time To Change
Interesting poem. I liked it. However I do feel it could use a little work. I think the line "No pound" felt a little stilted and could be changed just to emphasise the point and enhance the rhythm. I love how the tone changed from statement to questioning and to peaceful optimism. Well done.

imo x

ps/ Thank you for reviewing my work x

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