
7/1/2012 c5 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE IT
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE IT
6/19/2009 c3 blackrule
This story sounds alright so far, but how does it relate to "I Dare You"? If at all?
This story sounds alright so far, but how does it relate to "I Dare You"? If at all?
3/5/2009 c3 xcrazyladyo
I'm really anxious to see what happens next so please update soon. Are your other stories going to be updated as well?
I'm really anxious to see what happens next so please update soon. Are your other stories going to be updated as well?
2/12/2009 c2 lulu
dude that was great
loved it
well written
now, i know she's not dead n i really really wanna know what happens next so please update soon.
dude that was great
loved it
well written
now, i know she's not dead n i really really wanna know what happens next so please update soon.
7/16/2008 c2 Aya Moon
i'm intersted to see where this story is going...I like it so far.keep up the good work!
i'm intersted to see where this story is going...I like it so far.keep up the good work!
6/10/2008 c2 ssmoochic
this story is really good so far, very well written...i hope you can keep up with it and all your other ones
this story is really good so far, very well written...i hope you can keep up with it and all your other ones
6/9/2008 c2
4Ck90
Umm.. Hi. I know i might sound a bit stupid for saying this but I am a bit confused.. Does her enemy know that she is a girl. If they do talk about equal treatment. And just to be sure whateer that guy did was enough to kill her right? Yeah okay done with the stupid questions.. Update soonI want to hear more!

Umm.. Hi. I know i might sound a bit stupid for saying this but I am a bit confused.. Does her enemy know that she is a girl. If they do talk about equal treatment. And just to be sure whateer that guy did was enough to kill her right? Yeah okay done with the stupid questions.. Update soonI want to hear more!
3/1/2008 c1 athenaT
this story remind me of the movie Underworld (one of my favorite movies) so i'm very intrigued. i always love reading about a strong female character, so i'm already liking desari :) keep up the good work!
this story remind me of the movie Underworld (one of my favorite movies) so i'm very intrigued. i always love reading about a strong female character, so i'm already liking desari :) keep up the good work!
2/28/2008 c1 sillygoose2008
wow i mean wow that was so intense i mean there was so much detail and emotions you felt like you were the charatcer and a reader. This prologue is great you must continue the story.
wow i mean wow that was so intense i mean there was so much detail and emotions you felt like you were the charatcer and a reader. This prologue is great you must continue the story.