for A Teenager? Already?8/12/2009 c9 
11morticiansdaughter13
ok...its sort of a suckish ending. i loved it...but i HATE the ending. no offense tho...i really do like it...but u could've explained more about EVERYTHING u know? well...okay
11morticiansdaughter13ok...its sort of a suckish ending. i loved it...but i HATE the ending. no offense tho...i really do like it...but u could've explained more about EVERYTHING u know? well...okay
5/15/2008 c9 6Meghyn
hm i thought that the story was going good...but then the last chapter was just like *BAM* done, over, unrealistic. i think you were just too quick to finish it...
6Meghynhm i thought that the story was going good...but then the last chapter was just like *BAM* done, over, unrealistic. i think you were just too quick to finish it...
5/3/2008 c4 55StradiNette
I thought the story was going alright up until the end of this chatper.
You change it too abruptly and it doesn't even seem real.
55StradiNetteI thought the story was going alright up until the end of this chatper.
You change it too abruptly and it doesn't even seem real.
3/27/2008 c7 yayawhynot89
I like Dean :) lol hm I wonder if there will be a threesom with Dean,Trisha, and Myra
I like Dean :) lol hm I wonder if there will be a threesom with Dean,Trisha, and Myra
3/26/2008 c7 1miki248
wow 0_0 how could please dont get her pregnant um how about she says no then he falls for her twice as hard?
1miki248wow 0_0 how could please dont get her pregnant um how about she says no then he falls for her twice as hard?
3/26/2008 c7 Cynically In Love
Whoa! Lovely chapter! Dean and Myra seem like a cute couple! Update soon!
Whoa! Lovely chapter! Dean and Myra seem like a cute couple! Update soon!
2/29/2008 c4 Cynically In Love
...Wow...That's just sad. A slap in the face by your own father. That's proably one of the most painful thing that could happen to a girl. My gosh...you NEED to update soon.
...Wow...That's just sad. A slap in the face by your own father. That's proably one of the most painful thing that could happen to a girl. My gosh...you NEED to update soon.
2/9/2008 c2 Cynically In Love
Cute story! I liked Chapter 2 where Tisha "reunites" with her boyfriend! LOL! I'm still laughing! It's a great story so far! Update soon!
Cute story! I liked Chapter 2 where Tisha "reunites" with her boyfriend! LOL! I'm still laughing! It's a great story so far! Update soon!
2/6/2008 c1 Bazooka Joy
Aww Myra seems SO shy. And I wonder why Dean is being so nice to her. He couldn't actually *gasp* be interested in her! But yeah...I like these types of stories. Keep writing, girl.
Aww Myra seems SO shy. And I wonder why Dean is being so nice to her. He couldn't actually *gasp* be interested in her! But yeah...I like these types of stories. Keep writing, girl.