for Moon Love2/12/2008 c4 LoneWolf-234
awsomefull! Ok its official I am in love with you story ^.^ haha anyway cant wait for more!
awsomefull! Ok its official I am in love with you story ^.^ haha anyway cant wait for more!
2/9/2008 c3 Frozen in Time
I LOVE your story! Update, please!
I LOVE your story! Update, please!
2/8/2008 c2 LoneWolf-234
oh! Yah a werewolf story! I love werewolfs! good storyline and characters^.^ cant wait for more
oh! Yah a werewolf story! I love werewolfs! good storyline and characters^.^ cant wait for more
2/8/2008 c2 
1Aruru
Sweet. I wish I could do stuff like that.
=) Great story, by the by.
- Tied-Up Dog
1AruruSweet. I wish I could do stuff like that.
=) Great story, by the by.
- Tied-Up Dog
2/7/2008 c1 shea
its good,
reminds me of the book BLOOD AND CHOCOLATE.
if u've read that book u'll know i'm talking about,
but that doesn't mean u have to change it, it just means there are simularities and the stories could still be insanely diff.
you use thens a lot and some commas would add to he story, read it aloud, where ever u pause, put a comma.
its good,
reminds me of the book BLOOD AND CHOCOLATE.
if u've read that book u'll know i'm talking about,
but that doesn't mean u have to change it, it just means there are simularities and the stories could still be insanely diff.
you use thens a lot and some commas would add to he story, read it aloud, where ever u pause, put a comma.
2/7/2008 c1 InvisibleLight
Wow, so far this is pretty much perfect in grammar and spelling. I love the whole idea of it. (: Kari's a very interesting character. Update when you can
-GN Perone
Wow, so far this is pretty much perfect in grammar and spelling. I love the whole idea of it. (: Kari's a very interesting character. Update when you can
-GN Perone