for That's So Cheesy2/9/2008 c1 Sarah Allie
This is BEAUTIFUL :)! Thanks for putting a smile on my face, great job :D!
Sarah :) x
This is BEAUTIFUL :)! Thanks for putting a smile on my face, great job :D!
Sarah :) x
2/8/2008 c1 dOrKy-GuRl03
i like it..that is a good one shot...lol..hope that you will write more..bye..bye..
i like it..that is a good one shot...lol..hope that you will write more..bye..bye..
2/8/2008 c1 manda rose
aww, cute!
aww, cute!
2/8/2008 c1 Lochi
aww this was so cute and cheesy lol
really sweet and I don't mind that you didn't name the characters..it was good :)
aww this was so cute and cheesy lol
really sweet and I don't mind that you didn't name the characters..it was good :)
2/8/2008 c1 
2Dorkie
That was really great... moving through the years of their friendship and everything. Awesome.
2DorkieThat was really great... moving through the years of their friendship and everything. Awesome.
2/8/2008 c1 10sweet vanilla mint
SO SWEET. I'm adding it to my favorites! :) I especially liked the weed part. Hahaha! Good job on this story. I'm sure everyone who read it loved it. Thanks for posting! :)
10sweet vanilla mintSO SWEET. I'm adding it to my favorites! :) I especially liked the weed part. Hahaha! Good job on this story. I'm sure everyone who read it loved it. Thanks for posting! :)
2/8/2008 c1 11Greenhearts
Hey this is seriously awesome. I usually don't like cheesyness (I'm not going to say cheese because I LOVE cheese) either. I like originality and all. This story was really really great. I love it. :)
And I like the way you didn't name the characters. you. :)
11GreenheartsHey this is seriously awesome. I usually don't like cheesyness (I'm not going to say cheese because I LOVE cheese) either. I like originality and all. This story was really really great. I love it. :)
And I like the way you didn't name the characters. you. :)
2/7/2008 c1 Cassie
lol Loved it!
I am anti-romantic/cheesy too (:
lol Loved it!
I am anti-romantic/cheesy too (:
2/7/2008 c1 NoieD
Very cute; and I totally agree. I'd rather go bowling with my boyfriend on Valentine's than do the traditional romantic dinner. Great job!
Very cute; and I totally agree. I'd rather go bowling with my boyfriend on Valentine's than do the traditional romantic dinner. Great job!
2/7/2008 c1 3arial-96
Hahaahha...I love it. I like how you didn't name the characters, it makes the story lighter -if you know what I mean. It was very clever how you followed them throught the years... it added an interesting dynamic to it. My favorite part was the beginning "You didn’t tell a girl she was pretty. They all had cooties, and the ones with the extra cooties were the pretty ones. Yuck." hehhe.
3arial-96Hahaahha...I love it. I like how you didn't name the characters, it makes the story lighter -if you know what I mean. It was very clever how you followed them throught the years... it added an interesting dynamic to it. My favorite part was the beginning "You didn’t tell a girl she was pretty. They all had cooties, and the ones with the extra cooties were the pretty ones. Yuck." hehhe.
2/7/2008 c1 47Helizabeth
that was a good story. really good. i didn't realize until you mentioned it that you didn't name your characters. i don't think i could do that. good story!
47Helizabeththat was a good story. really good. i didn't realize until you mentioned it that you didn't name your characters. i don't think i could do that. good story!
2/7/2008 c1 1charliedon'tdie
I like this (:
It's lively and sweet. It starts off a little awkwardly but gets better toward the end =D
1charliedon'tdieI like this (:
It's lively and sweet. It starts off a little awkwardly but gets better toward the end =D