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5/21/2008 c1 8berf
i like how you took the classic story and put a new twist to it. the imagery was very imaginative and i really liked the disturbing feel of it. wish there was more (:

2/17/2008 c1 18Rose Valentine
Dark and simple horror that's really great!
2/12/2008 c1 4Mechanical Dolls
Whoo! It's good! I like it. Any chance of updating it? I'd really like to see where it's heading. Hehe. Anyway, I like the grotesqueness (wtf is that a word) and the general creepiness and the mystery surrounding it.

Keep writing :)

2/11/2008 c1 4BrennaRaven
That was great. I really like the imagry you created. It reminded me of a picture I've seen of a little creepy girl with the same sort of colour palette, standing in a creepy forest. There need to be more horror stories like this one. Cheers!

- Brenna
2/10/2008 c1 archived
oh that was spooky...

i liked it

something about those horses, huh?

really good imagery
2/9/2008 c1 2Roberto Franchesco
Impressive! I like the twisted "Alice in Wonderland" meets "Goldilocks" meets "A nightmare on Elm Street" feel of this piece. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent descriptions and use of imagery. Keep it up!

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