for Locks5/21/2008 c1 
8berf
i like how you took the classic story and put a new twist to it. the imagery was very imaginative and i really liked the disturbing feel of it. wish there was more (:
-sarah
8berfi like how you took the classic story and put a new twist to it. the imagery was very imaginative and i really liked the disturbing feel of it. wish there was more (:
-sarah
2/12/2008 c1 4Mechanical Dolls
Whoo! It's good! I like it. Any chance of updating it? I'd really like to see where it's heading. Hehe. Anyway, I like the grotesqueness (wtf is that a word) and the general creepiness and the mystery surrounding it.
Keep writing :)
-MD
4Mechanical DollsWhoo! It's good! I like it. Any chance of updating it? I'd really like to see where it's heading. Hehe. Anyway, I like the grotesqueness (wtf is that a word) and the general creepiness and the mystery surrounding it.
Keep writing :)
-MD
2/11/2008 c1 4BrennaRaven
That was great. I really like the imagry you created. It reminded me of a picture I've seen of a little creepy girl with the same sort of colour palette, standing in a creepy forest. There need to be more horror stories like this one. Cheers!
- Brenna
4BrennaRavenThat was great. I really like the imagry you created. It reminded me of a picture I've seen of a little creepy girl with the same sort of colour palette, standing in a creepy forest. There need to be more horror stories like this one. Cheers!
- Brenna
2/10/2008 c1 archived
oh that was spooky...
i liked it
something about those horses, huh?
really good imagery
oh that was spooky...
i liked it
something about those horses, huh?
really good imagery
2/9/2008 c1 2Roberto Franchesco
Impressive! I like the twisted "Alice in Wonderland" meets "Goldilocks" meets "A nightmare on Elm Street" feel of this piece. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent descriptions and use of imagery. Keep it up!
2Roberto FranchescoImpressive! I like the twisted "Alice in Wonderland" meets "Goldilocks" meets "A nightmare on Elm Street" feel of this piece. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent descriptions and use of imagery. Keep it up!