for Once More With Feeling11/18/2015 c5 ShellChelle
Please update! Don't let what that unhappy reviewer say about you get to your head!I think it's a really nice story (even without a definite couple yet),it's somewhat dramatic but not annoyingly please pick up your pen again(err open the word document again)cause girl you got a talent for writting,so embrace I read the summary for the first part of the series and I was like "Nah this is gonna be really annoying" but then I started reading it and got really hooked up to the story and I think this is better than most published stories.I hope you find the inspiration you need again for this story.I''m begging you PLEASE update or my heart will break,no seriously.P.S if you're still in uni I wish you luck for all of your classes.
Please update! Don't let what that unhappy reviewer say about you get to your head!I think it's a really nice story (even without a definite couple yet),it's somewhat dramatic but not annoyingly please pick up your pen again(err open the word document again)cause girl you got a talent for writting,so embrace I read the summary for the first part of the series and I was like "Nah this is gonna be really annoying" but then I started reading it and got really hooked up to the story and I think this is better than most published stories.I hope you find the inspiration you need again for this story.I''m begging you PLEASE update or my heart will break,no seriously.P.S if you're still in uni I wish you luck for all of your classes.
7/28/2013 c4 
1loveSZbrownie
Wow. First of all, I realise that you wrote the first story of this trilogy when you were a teenager and I want to praise you as it was quite well written. Fictionpress is meant to be an escape and is meant for drama. In saying that, however, some of the things there were quite a bit unbelievable (maybe things like paedophile teachers that don't get punished straight away and 29 year old principals do happen in America.) I was disappointed because I don't believe your first story ended with solid finality. I felt like you just ended it because you were sick of writing about her in high school and you just wanted to move on to a different stage of her life.
I read one chapter of your second story and despite the fact that it seemed like it would be an enjoyable read, I realised that you had a third story. Just by reading the synopsis of the third story, I could tell that the second story wouldn't give me the satisfaction of a finished story, which I surmised from the first story to be about her family and Gabriel. It kinda reminded me of the twilight saga.
I like that this story is set in university because I think these stories are more mature . However, there are a few things that do irk me about your stories apart from the fact that you have dragged it into two more sequels. Okay, I know its fictionpress and we all love to read about gorgeous people, but I guess I find her chance meetings with all these random gorgeous men a bit unbelievable, they pop up everywhere after the inital meeting and then they happen to be conveniently connected to her somehow. I think there should be a balance between realistic and dramatic. Another thing that irks me is the fact that she's so attractive. Maybe its cos those kinds of girls are generally confident and that's why they are attractive. Another issue is the fact that the other main plot point concerning family has become a bit ridiculous with the shift to her other half siblings. The fact that Paul was actually only her half brother was good. Maybe there are lots of messed up family situations like this, but in this story I feel like its just twists and turns to make the story interesting.
The truth is, I actually really enjoyed Silence's story. It was interesting and dramatic! I just would have preferred for it to be focused and for it to have ended properly in the first story. Maybe 25 chapters or something. If you did do a sequel, I think it would be interesting to see Mary alice and spencer's story. Or something else shown from her point of view. I just feel like each of these stories are completely separate and start off as new stories but they have the same characters and the same confusing issues popping up again. Please don't be discouraged by this review. I just wanted to tell you honestly how I felt and maybe you know these things already!
Hope to see a new chapter or a new story from you )
1loveSZbrownieWow. First of all, I realise that you wrote the first story of this trilogy when you were a teenager and I want to praise you as it was quite well written. Fictionpress is meant to be an escape and is meant for drama. In saying that, however, some of the things there were quite a bit unbelievable (maybe things like paedophile teachers that don't get punished straight away and 29 year old principals do happen in America.) I was disappointed because I don't believe your first story ended with solid finality. I felt like you just ended it because you were sick of writing about her in high school and you just wanted to move on to a different stage of her life.
I read one chapter of your second story and despite the fact that it seemed like it would be an enjoyable read, I realised that you had a third story. Just by reading the synopsis of the third story, I could tell that the second story wouldn't give me the satisfaction of a finished story, which I surmised from the first story to be about her family and Gabriel. It kinda reminded me of the twilight saga.
I like that this story is set in university because I think these stories are more mature . However, there are a few things that do irk me about your stories apart from the fact that you have dragged it into two more sequels. Okay, I know its fictionpress and we all love to read about gorgeous people, but I guess I find her chance meetings with all these random gorgeous men a bit unbelievable, they pop up everywhere after the inital meeting and then they happen to be conveniently connected to her somehow. I think there should be a balance between realistic and dramatic. Another thing that irks me is the fact that she's so attractive. Maybe its cos those kinds of girls are generally confident and that's why they are attractive. Another issue is the fact that the other main plot point concerning family has become a bit ridiculous with the shift to her other half siblings. The fact that Paul was actually only her half brother was good. Maybe there are lots of messed up family situations like this, but in this story I feel like its just twists and turns to make the story interesting.
The truth is, I actually really enjoyed Silence's story. It was interesting and dramatic! I just would have preferred for it to be focused and for it to have ended properly in the first story. Maybe 25 chapters or something. If you did do a sequel, I think it would be interesting to see Mary alice and spencer's story. Or something else shown from her point of view. I just feel like each of these stories are completely separate and start off as new stories but they have the same characters and the same confusing issues popping up again. Please don't be discouraged by this review. I just wanted to tell you honestly how I felt and maybe you know these things already!
Hope to see a new chapter or a new story from you )
3/25/2013 c5 5Blueyes57
It's been 5 years, you still in college and can't update? Who cares what a stranger has to say about the way you write? Are they having to part with hard earned money for the privilege? I think not! Finish what you start hun! Get back to this story!
5Blueyes57It's been 5 years, you still in college and can't update? Who cares what a stranger has to say about the way you write? Are they having to part with hard earned money for the privilege? I think not! Finish what you start hun! Get back to this story!
4/16/2010 c5 14Sapphyre Nymph
this is getting pretty interesting..
i do wish that you'll be able to find your inspiration and continue this story...
i know that they'll most likely get together but i want to know how that happens..
oh yeah, and thanks.. :)
14Sapphyre Nymphthis is getting pretty interesting..
i do wish that you'll be able to find your inspiration and continue this story...
i know that they'll most likely get together but i want to know how that happens..
oh yeah, and thanks.. :)
1/30/2010 c5 BOOKCRAZY
Hey, i haven't read a lot of books on, here and the ones i have are great, ugh guess your books really stood out to me, and i really fell in love with your writing (notice the cliche) so m i was wondering if you will ever finish this story, its because its so different, and as an avid reader, io have read many books, but i don't think i've come across one thats as brilliant as yours, so i was wondering if you could pretty please write some more, i respect it if you don't! But i really love this story!
AS
BOOKCRAZY
:)
Hey, i haven't read a lot of books on, here and the ones i have are great, ugh guess your books really stood out to me, and i really fell in love with your writing (notice the cliche) so m i was wondering if you will ever finish this story, its because its so different, and as an avid reader, io have read many books, but i don't think i've come across one thats as brilliant as yours, so i was wondering if you could pretty please write some more, i respect it if you don't! But i really love this story!
AS
BOOKCRAZY
:)
12/4/2009 c4 1HeartsOfDiamonds
I love the story so far and i would really like to know what happens next. Are you planning to update anytime soon? Please do.
1HeartsOfDiamondsI love the story so far and i would really like to know what happens next. Are you planning to update anytime soon? Please do.
6/2/2009 c5 theslykit
i was so not happy that silence didn't end up with gabriel! please let them end up together! T_T and since it is almost/is summer..please update soon! OK? ^_^
i was so not happy that silence didn't end up with gabriel! please let them end up together! T_T and since it is almost/is summer..please update soon! OK? ^_^
4/13/2009 c5 bw695x
Okay, I am totally waiting for an update! Its been months! Gabriel and Silence/Rory are amazing and I cannot wait to see how they meet again.. especially if Rory brings back Connor (who sounds amazing btw)!
Okay, I am totally waiting for an update! Its been months! Gabriel and Silence/Rory are amazing and I cannot wait to see how they meet again.. especially if Rory brings back Connor (who sounds amazing btw)!
1/26/2009 c1 cosmopolitan
i really hope that you continue with this as you are an extremely talented writer whose work i simply adore and genuinely wish to see more of!
please, at least consider returning to writing to just finish this piece... it's such a brilliant one that you've put such time into-the series as a whole, that is-that it;d bea terrible waste to see it all culminate to an incomplete finale
p.s. love that placebo song... and the best of album named after this as well!
i really hope that you continue with this as you are an extremely talented writer whose work i simply adore and genuinely wish to see more of!
please, at least consider returning to writing to just finish this piece... it's such a brilliant one that you've put such time into-the series as a whole, that is-that it;d bea terrible waste to see it all culminate to an incomplete finale
p.s. love that placebo song... and the best of album named after this as well!
1/18/2009 c5 11Sakiru Yume
Ack! You stopped! You can't stop! This is a really good story!
Let's see how many exclamation marks it takes to make you start writing again.
But seriously-please start writing again. I love the story. I absolutely love it.
11Sakiru YumeAck! You stopped! You can't stop! This is a really good story!
Let's see how many exclamation marks it takes to make you start writing again.
But seriously-please start writing again. I love the story. I absolutely love it.
11/2/2008 c5 1glamoureste
WHAT?
You're stories are anything but crappy!
I think they're amazing and i really truly hope you get your inspiration back and updated soon!
I'm totally eager to see what's going to happen and i LOVE your series! :]
1glamouresteWHAT?
You're stories are anything but crappy!
I think they're amazing and i really truly hope you get your inspiration back and updated soon!
I'm totally eager to see what's going to happen and i LOVE your series! :]
7/9/2008 c4 sunflower.kiss
Wow, this is getting so dramatic. So far, Mr. Donovan cheated on his wife, and so did Silence's dad. Eep. =] More please.
Wow, this is getting so dramatic. So far, Mr. Donovan cheated on his wife, and so did Silence's dad. Eep. =] More please.