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12/30/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
gorgeous images
4/15/2009 c1 29diffident
I especially love the lines "these are / promises left lonely, singeing / the air with sweet mirage, like / the fragrances of oranges in / winter." Just absolutely brilliant, as is the rest of the poem. I think I love everything about this. The images it evokes remind me of The Decemberists, if you're familiar with them. Take that as a high compliment, because it is.

marie
2/19/2008 c1 she smolders
Willow trees always will have a special place in my heart because I can remember an afternoon that I spent lying under one with someone who meant a lot to me back then.

I love the wistful feeling in the last few lines. Take care.
2/10/2008 c1 50In the Rye
sounds like you just threw in all the exotic words without using them properly. but otherwise i liked it. it had a lonely feel to it.

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