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10/28/2012 c1 1oneshothangover
Hii :)

This is a really nice poem!

Short and concise. Really liked it. :D

Although I didn't like the line 'They fly through everyone's ear'. It's not like I hate it, it's just you could've written it a litttle better. But don't listen to me, my poems suck. Which is why I never post them on fictionpress but I do post my stories :D Which, if you want, you can check out *hint* *hint* xD

But seriously, I liked it a lot! (:
10/6/2008 c2 8Written
I'm actually not familiar with the form of the petrarchan sonnet, but I really liked this! gorgeous imagery.
10/6/2008 c1 Written
interesting! I really like this piece and how you talk about the love "blossoming".

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