for The Jetsetter's Summer7/17/2019 c30 Guest
Reading this in 2019! I loved it. I didn't even think to question (at first) how it became possible for the barely legal protagonists to live with their bosses without supervision. I do like how the story didn't dwell on that and how it just went on about this crazy, giddy, fever dream adventure because I'm on board! I just wish the ending wasn't so abrupt. I'm over here feeling my excitement plummet down at the words "The End" when I was almost sure there was one more chapter left to tie everything up. I understand this was one of your old works, but I really think it should have made it to the shelves. Anyway, all the best in your writing career!
Reading this in 2019! I loved it. I didn't even think to question (at first) how it became possible for the barely legal protagonists to live with their bosses without supervision. I do like how the story didn't dwell on that and how it just went on about this crazy, giddy, fever dream adventure because I'm on board! I just wish the ending wasn't so abrupt. I'm over here feeling my excitement plummet down at the words "The End" when I was almost sure there was one more chapter left to tie everything up. I understand this was one of your old works, but I really think it should have made it to the shelves. Anyway, all the best in your writing career!
1/8/2019 c28 Guest
The story was okay. I felt like it had a feel of a Disney movie with not so great acting and not much context. I was quite disappointed since "The Broken Road" was really good of yours.
The story was okay. I felt like it had a feel of a Disney movie with not so great acting and not much context. I was quite disappointed since "The Broken Road" was really good of yours.
7/23/2016 c28 Guest
It's a lovly story!
It's a lovly story!
7/7/2015 c28 Th p
I would like to see a sequel. I want to know of Allies friendship with brooked will could give her some opportunities with fame. Being the best friend of Brooke plus she's. A better person now. She didnt have a love interest but maybe she could be a dancer full time. Greg is with Sam but her being the every girl it's still a star crosses love. The same with Jayla and Jon I wanna see how people take there interacial romance.
I would like to see a sequel. I want to know of Allies friendship with brooked will could give her some opportunities with fame. Being the best friend of Brooke plus she's. A better person now. She didnt have a love interest but maybe she could be a dancer full time. Greg is with Sam but her being the every girl it's still a star crosses love. The same with Jayla and Jon I wanna see how people take there interacial romance.
7/7/2015 c30 Guest
I would like for you to do a sequel to this. We didn't get to see the girls on Ellen or how it would change their lives further
I would like for you to do a sequel to this. We didn't get to see the girls on Ellen or how it would change their lives further
3/23/2013 c29 
12GossamerSilverglow
I could see this story morph into a full fledge adult romance novel. Each one could have their own stories. I have to say that I too like Jayla and Sam's stories the best.
12GossamerSilverglowI could see this story morph into a full fledge adult romance novel. Each one could have their own stories. I have to say that I too like Jayla and Sam's stories the best.
8/16/2012 c30 AnonymousReads
Another great story, i really liked it, i think that you might have made sam seem more use to alchohol and allie a bit confusing when not explaining more about her mom. I guesss that is what happens when you put three stories in one some detail gets left out. Good story. :)
Another great story, i really liked it, i think that you might have made sam seem more use to alchohol and allie a bit confusing when not explaining more about her mom. I guesss that is what happens when you put three stories in one some detail gets left out. Good story. :)
7/23/2012 c1 sandra
nice!
nice!
11/4/2011 c28 1SweetVindication
I love, love, loved this so much! This was so good I just couldn't stop reading it but I'm kinda upset I finished it all in a day. Jonathan is one of the best characters ever, and I wished I could be Jayla. Your writing is fabulous, and I loved Prada and Prejudice too.
1SweetVindicationI love, love, loved this so much! This was so good I just couldn't stop reading it but I'm kinda upset I finished it all in a day. Jonathan is one of the best characters ever, and I wished I could be Jayla. Your writing is fabulous, and I loved Prada and Prejudice too.
4/21/2011 c28 5BlueAki
I read through this whole story in one day, non-stop. It was great! I loved all the characters and I really wish I could just know what happens after this. Do Jayla and Sam stay in the relationships with their hotties? Will Allie pursue dance? And I REALLY want to read the Ellen interview. Great job on and awesome story!
5BlueAkiI read through this whole story in one day, non-stop. It was great! I loved all the characters and I really wish I could just know what happens after this. Do Jayla and Sam stay in the relationships with their hotties? Will Allie pursue dance? And I REALLY want to read the Ellen interview. Great job on and awesome story!