for Stuck Between Pressed Pages Of A Scrapbook2/18/2012 c2 floridapanther28OvernOut
Ah, this chapter was funny too...!~
Hm, work on the grammar tho, okay? I think that if you improved in grammar then more people would read. c:
Also... um... I know this is what most authors HATE to hear, but I think your characters are becoming just a TAD bit sue-ish. Don't worry though- just a TAD bit.
But I have to say that I really love the humor, especially the muffin 8D Yaaaaay muffins!
Ah, this chapter was funny too...!~
Hm, work on the grammar tho, okay? I think that if you improved in grammar then more people would read. c:
Also... um... I know this is what most authors HATE to hear, but I think your characters are becoming just a TAD bit sue-ish. Don't worry though- just a TAD bit.
But I have to say that I really love the humor, especially the muffin 8D Yaaaaay muffins!
2/18/2012 c1 floridapanther28OvernOut
This is the most adorable thing ever ^_^
I may just have to login specifically to put this on story alert ;3
Hm... I think the grammar started out okay, but slowly got to be not as good in the end.
I think the description was amazing though!
This is the most adorable thing ever ^_^
I may just have to login specifically to put this on story alert ;3
Hm... I think the grammar started out okay, but slowly got to be not as good in the end.
I think the description was amazing though!
11/26/2011 c18 
39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Dude, I have been watching the chapter number all night to see how many chapters are left yet...I still thought "WTF it's not over-it can't be!" and checked the number, and yet here we are...I wish it wasn't over but sequel? yay! time to profile stalk- I mean...stalk? who said that? haha anyways great job on this story! I reall enjoyed it! :D
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurDude, I have been watching the chapter number all night to see how many chapters are left yet...I still thought "WTF it's not over-it can't be!" and checked the number, and yet here we are...I wish it wasn't over but sequel? yay! time to profile stalk- I mean...stalk? who said that? haha anyways great job on this story! I reall enjoyed it! :D
7/12/2011 c11 jayyluvr28
DAMN... Garen has some gut pretending to be Cayden. I FUBING lurrrrvvvvvvv this story!
DAMN... Garen has some gut pretending to be Cayden. I FUBING lurrrrvvvvvvv this story!
6/19/2011 c2 EmeraldReporter
That emo shit is a real turn OFF.
I was really liking the story too, what a shame.
That emo shit is a real turn OFF.
I was really liking the story too, what a shame.
12/11/2010 c1 ohmytuesday
I'm too lazy to elaborate but
OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON (Burning Down /coughahemcough)
because you are so awesome this shits rainbows
I'm too lazy to elaborate but
OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON (Burning Down /coughahemcough)
because you are so awesome this shits rainbows
6/1/2010 c18 R0ck3rAng3l4444
In the last chapters i was wondering where the hell did Jan and Jason go, but besides that i LOVED your story!
In the last chapters i was wondering where the hell did Jan and Jason go, but besides that i LOVED your story!
10/15/2009 c1 Ana FFN
okay, I'd like to say
I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC!
ITS REALLY GOOD
but here's a tip
It is actually not M rated
put it on T rate
(I mean, Its an AWESOME STORY AND I woudnt have found it if I havent searched for Twincest (seriously) you'd get more reviews if you put it on T XD)
well, off to the sequel
okay, I'd like to say
I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC!
ITS REALLY GOOD
but here's a tip
It is actually not M rated
put it on T rate
(I mean, Its an AWESOME STORY AND I woudnt have found it if I havent searched for Twincest (seriously) you'd get more reviews if you put it on T XD)
well, off to the sequel
10/13/2009 c16 1Cassidy Valentin
Hi!
Finally! They pulled it together. I've been waiting this part for the longest time! Hell! Felt great when they finally did it! I thought they would never do it and just parted ways! It's so close to the ending! You've done it very well! Thank you for writing this story!
1Cassidy ValentinHi!
Finally! They pulled it together. I've been waiting this part for the longest time! Hell! Felt great when they finally did it! I thought they would never do it and just parted ways! It's so close to the ending! You've done it very well! Thank you for writing this story!
10/2/2009 c1 5Sure Things Falling
I loved it! A really good start to a story, it drew me RIGHT in, which is kind of the point isn't it? Can't wait to get through reading the rest of it...
I loved the daisy chain making and the girl cooties. So true.
5Sure Things FallingI loved it! A really good start to a story, it drew me RIGHT in, which is kind of the point isn't it? Can't wait to get through reading the rest of it...
I loved the daisy chain making and the girl cooties. So true.
8/26/2009 c18 zagraet
omgomgomg!1! a sequel!1! yay! i'll go read it right now because this was just so graet! NOT
although i read only the first and last chapters i must say this is so bad it's almost funny
from the very first chapter (when they were seven) you make little uke seem like he's gonna grow boobs somewhere in the future (thus turning him into a shemale and defying the purpose of male/male), not to mention that he's girlier than any girl i know (and the first person naration makes me suspect you made him that way so you can identify better with him ;))
and in the last chapter we see that seme is a gorgeus sex god/manwhore
wow, truly a mach made in heaven!
omgomgomg!1! a sequel!1! yay! i'll go read it right now because this was just so graet! NOT
although i read only the first and last chapters i must say this is so bad it's almost funny
from the very first chapter (when they were seven) you make little uke seem like he's gonna grow boobs somewhere in the future (thus turning him into a shemale and defying the purpose of male/male), not to mention that he's girlier than any girl i know (and the first person naration makes me suspect you made him that way so you can identify better with him ;))
and in the last chapter we see that seme is a gorgeus sex god/manwhore
wow, truly a mach made in heaven!