1/5/2009 c6 acousticbruises
hahah I can't understand how this chapter passed by meh attention. Top notch mate, *goes on the to the next*
hahah I can't understand how this chapter passed by meh attention. Top notch mate, *goes on the to the next*
1/5/2009 c8 6CrimsonLilly
You. Are. A. Friggin. Genius!
Two chapters in what-ten days?
I'm glad you're back and going strong with your stories!
I never did review this story, but recent development in the story made me want to speak up...
I like it how you made Garen's change seem so easy and kinda sudden-it didn't seem forced,it was really natural. Though I like to think that he always did feel something more than brotherly love, just never thought too deeply on that subject.
I'm a sap, I know .
I love how they seem to be missing each other all the time-when Garen starts feeling something for Cadyn, Cadyn decides it's high time he tried to forget about his dear big brother :)
Anyways,thanks for this amazingly fast update and keep on going!
You know how we junkies need our regular fixes ;)
You. Are. A. Friggin. Genius!
Two chapters in what-ten days?
I'm glad you're back and going strong with your stories!
I never did review this story, but recent development in the story made me want to speak up...
I like it how you made Garen's change seem so easy and kinda sudden-it didn't seem forced,it was really natural. Though I like to think that he always did feel something more than brotherly love, just never thought too deeply on that subject.
I'm a sap, I know .
I love how they seem to be missing each other all the time-when Garen starts feeling something for Cadyn, Cadyn decides it's high time he tried to forget about his dear big brother :)
Anyways,thanks for this amazingly fast update and keep on going!
You know how we junkies need our regular fixes ;)
1/4/2009 c8 HazeleyedHoney
Cadyn's not the only one who forgot about Derek, I did as well. I think if Cadyn needs a someone to help him to get over his feelings for Garen that he should try it with Derek and just forget about Kelsey. I can't believe that he doesn't realize that he's gay! He is gay isn't he? I mean the only human he's ever been attracted to is his brother right? So if his brother went through a sex change that would make him straight? o.O I'm very confused. I think he should forget about Kelsey and go out with Derek. If only to just find out if he's gay, straight, or bi. In fact, he should just go out with Derek to alleviate my confusion. lol Great chapter. Update as soon ss possible.
Cadyn's not the only one who forgot about Derek, I did as well. I think if Cadyn needs a someone to help him to get over his feelings for Garen that he should try it with Derek and just forget about Kelsey. I can't believe that he doesn't realize that he's gay! He is gay isn't he? I mean the only human he's ever been attracted to is his brother right? So if his brother went through a sex change that would make him straight? o.O I'm very confused. I think he should forget about Kelsey and go out with Derek. If only to just find out if he's gay, straight, or bi. In fact, he should just go out with Derek to alleviate my confusion. lol Great chapter. Update as soon ss possible.
1/4/2009 c8 1Desaki Akan
Hm...so reviews=quicker updates? Yay! I'm gonna try to review from now on =] *Still hates Kelsey* Derek sounded cool though, bring on Derek! lol
Hm...so reviews=quicker updates? Yay! I'm gonna try to review from now on =] *Still hates Kelsey* Derek sounded cool though, bring on Derek! lol
1/4/2009 c8 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
if i havnt said so before I really like your story.
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE (whispers) "action" STARTS!
if i havnt said so before I really like your story.
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE (whispers) "action" STARTS!
1/4/2009 c8 10zomgnessa
Arghh why cant they just realise that they both are madly in love with eachother and go in the closet and fuck like little bunnies.
Blunt... yes.. I know but they really should =D
Arghh why cant they just realise that they both are madly in love with eachother and go in the closet and fuck like little bunnies.
Blunt... yes.. I know but they really should =D
1/4/2009 c8 lpluver
No! dump Kelsey and go out with Derek! Keep up the excellent work!
-lpluver
No! dump Kelsey and go out with Derek! Keep up the excellent work!
-lpluver
1/3/2009 c7 2mia5081
Aw, poor Garen. Obviously the two of them are fighting an attraction to one another. You know what I think? I think they should just kiss and be happy lol. The end.
Update soon!
~Mia
Aw, poor Garen. Obviously the two of them are fighting an attraction to one another. You know what I think? I think they should just kiss and be happy lol. The end.
Update soon!
~Mia
1/1/2009 c7 10zomgnessa
you need to update asap =D
I'm awaiting what cadyn is thinking about kelsey
oh an btw. I was looking back at the last few chapters and in ch. 5 jan says that she got cadyn a lip ring and a belly ring. but in the 6 ch. he only complains about the lip ring. I was just wondering if you'd forgoten you gave him a belly ring.
you need to update asap =D
I'm awaiting what cadyn is thinking about kelsey
oh an btw. I was looking back at the last few chapters and in ch. 5 jan says that she got cadyn a lip ring and a belly ring. but in the 6 ch. he only complains about the lip ring. I was just wondering if you'd forgoten you gave him a belly ring.
1/1/2009 c7 xoxo1
''I’m not getting laid enough so that’s why my body’s having like...a crisis or something.''
LMFAOO
''I’m not getting laid enough so that’s why my body’s having like...a crisis or something.''
LMFAOO
12/31/2008 c7 1Desaki Akan
Wow. This is a really cool story. =] I usually don't read stuff like this, but something compelled me to. This chapter was my favorite of all of them, even though Kelsey is...well...a hoe(Pardon my language)but Garen's POV is my favorite so it makes up for her hoey-ness =] Happy New Year!
Wow. This is a really cool story. =] I usually don't read stuff like this, but something compelled me to. This chapter was my favorite of all of them, even though Kelsey is...well...a hoe(Pardon my language)but Garen's POV is my favorite so it makes up for her hoey-ness =] Happy New Year!
12/31/2008 c7 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
hehehe i'll give you more than a smiley face.lol
I really love this story.I can't wait to see how there relationship progresses. I hate Kelsey!
so...um... oh what the hell = ]
hehehe i'll give you more than a smiley face.lol
I really love this story.I can't wait to see how there relationship progresses. I hate Kelsey!
so...um... oh what the hell = ]
12/31/2008 c7 8insomkneeack
Another wonderous chapter. So now Garen's beginning to feel something, eh? I await future chapters!
Ash
Another wonderous chapter. So now Garen's beginning to feel something, eh? I await future chapters!
Ash