for Stuck Between Pressed Pages Of A Scrapbook4/13/2009 c16 HazeleyedHoney
I was kinda hoping you wouldn't do something like that only 'cause once that happens alls left is for them to admit to each other their feelings, Cadyn would need to break up with Kelsey, (I could see her outing them) they may have to deal with the public's and families aversion to incest since it could get out that they are a couple.
I was kinda hoping you wouldn't do something like that only 'cause once that happens alls left is for them to admit to each other their feelings, Cadyn would need to break up with Kelsey, (I could see her outing them) they may have to deal with the public's and families aversion to incest since it could get out that they are a couple.
4/13/2009 c16 
1EllYouSeeWhy
I was having a sucky day but this made me happy :D:D I was expecting him to come out first and then the whole massive confession thing come later but im not complaining :)
1EllYouSeeWhyI was having a sucky day but this made me happy :D:D I was expecting him to come out first and then the whole massive confession thing come later but im not complaining :)
4/13/2009 c16 calamity jane
OK I'll admit, you had me nervous there for a minute! I couldn't believe that G would just walk away from C like that, and *phew* thankfully I was right. I was not disappointed at all and think you did a great job with the whole scene, esp the light kiss at the end.
Thanks for another emotionally filled chapter. I'm so looking forward to your next one!
OK I'll admit, you had me nervous there for a minute! I couldn't believe that G would just walk away from C like that, and *phew* thankfully I was right. I was not disappointed at all and think you did a great job with the whole scene, esp the light kiss at the end.
Thanks for another emotionally filled chapter. I'm so looking forward to your next one!
4/13/2009 c16 1xorosieox
Those last few paragraphs were gorgeous. Just like I imagined their first kiss to be like- sweet and simple and angsty and unexpected. You musta been inside of my head!
1xorosieoxThose last few paragraphs were gorgeous. Just like I imagined their first kiss to be like- sweet and simple and angsty and unexpected. You musta been inside of my head!
4/13/2009 c15 calamity jane
Oh no, poor G & C...I feel so bad for both of them. I liked the scene between Garen and Jason in the boys room, it's nice to see a different side of Jason. Ugh who wants to watch those two sucking face! Kelsey has got to go and soon!
Terrific update, very emotional.
Oh no, poor G & C...I feel so bad for both of them. I liked the scene between Garen and Jason in the boys room, it's nice to see a different side of Jason. Ugh who wants to watch those two sucking face! Kelsey has got to go and soon!
Terrific update, very emotional.
4/13/2009 c16 aripie
OMG HOW I WISH FOR LARGE FONTS! ya
ay for their kis!
i love you! thank you! cant wait for more angst now lol
OMG HOW I WISH FOR LARGE FONTS! ya
ay for their kis!
i love you! thank you! cant wait for more angst now lol
4/13/2009 c16 kepteinen
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU YOU UPDATE SO FAST AND SO LONG AND SHIT AND I FORGIVE YOU I CAN'T REMEMBER THE PREVIEW ANYWAY OH MY GOD THEY KISSED FUCKING FINALLY.
Not even caps lock and a lack of punctuation is enough to express my joy.
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU YOU UPDATE SO FAST AND SO LONG AND SHIT AND I FORGIVE YOU I CAN'T REMEMBER THE PREVIEW ANYWAY OH MY GOD THEY KISSED FUCKING FINALLY.
Not even caps lock and a lack of punctuation is enough to express my joy.
4/12/2009 c15 6CrimsonLilly
Did you just make Cadyn confess? On top of it all,Garen didn't figure it out? Oh bloody 'ell! I loved it,even though I had a small desire of wringing Garen's neck...I read the preview to the next chapter and now I cant wait for it!
6CrimsonLillyDid you just make Cadyn confess? On top of it all,Garen didn't figure it out? Oh bloody 'ell! I loved it,even though I had a small desire of wringing Garen's neck...I read the preview to the next chapter and now I cant wait for it!
4/11/2009 c15 10zomgnessa
Aww poor Cadyn, poor Garen. They just need to get together already! I want to push them in a closet and not let them out until they have thuroly[sp? Im sure that is spelled wrong =P] kissed the hell out of eachother. Its nice that you have introduced Casey a tid bit more, I'm curious to hear more from and about her as well as for you to update as soon as possible =]. I freaked when I saw that you updated. Literally jumped for joy.
10zomgnessaAww poor Cadyn, poor Garen. They just need to get together already! I want to push them in a closet and not let them out until they have thuroly[sp? Im sure that is spelled wrong =P] kissed the hell out of eachother. Its nice that you have introduced Casey a tid bit more, I'm curious to hear more from and about her as well as for you to update as soon as possible =]. I freaked when I saw that you updated. Literally jumped for joy.
4/11/2009 c15 2Rae Simmons
Okay, so I'm really sorry that it took this long to review, but I just finally found my head again. It's taken nearly a fortnight to find it since it launched some time around one am tuesday the thirty first. During that period my response to this story was limited to "OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG..." and you deserve just so much more. On top of that my original response to chapter 13 was lost when my computer crashed and I have not really had time to rewrite it thanks to an overload of projects. I promise the next chapter you publish will get a nice long review but at the moment all I can say is that, the last three chapters, all of it was amazing and if there was ever a story that could put me into cardiac arrest it would be this one. Oh, and:
"SQUE!"
2Rae SimmonsOkay, so I'm really sorry that it took this long to review, but I just finally found my head again. It's taken nearly a fortnight to find it since it launched some time around one am tuesday the thirty first. During that period my response to this story was limited to "OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG..." and you deserve just so much more. On top of that my original response to chapter 13 was lost when my computer crashed and I have not really had time to rewrite it thanks to an overload of projects. I promise the next chapter you publish will get a nice long review but at the moment all I can say is that, the last three chapters, all of it was amazing and if there was ever a story that could put me into cardiac arrest it would be this one. Oh, and:
"SQUE!"
4/10/2009 c15 1Desaki Akan
Oh, wow. Wow, wow, wow. I loved this chapter, there was so much romance I was on the edge of my seat everytime going "this is it, this is it!" And even though everything pretty much went to hell for the twins, the ending was my favorite part. I hated it when Kelsey and Cadyn were making out. I wanted to puke. But still, amazing, amazing, amazing.
1Desaki AkanOh, wow. Wow, wow, wow. I loved this chapter, there was so much romance I was on the edge of my seat everytime going "this is it, this is it!" And even though everything pretty much went to hell for the twins, the ending was my favorite part. I hated it when Kelsey and Cadyn were making out. I wanted to puke. But still, amazing, amazing, amazing.
4/10/2009 c15 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
reading this story always makes me incredibly/insanely happy.
the plot and the character development gets stronger with every chapter. Its amazing.
i can't wait for the next update!
reading this story always makes me incredibly/insanely happy.
the plot and the character development gets stronger with every chapter. Its amazing.
i can't wait for the next update!
4/10/2009 c15 HazeleyedHoney
Was Cadyn gonna tell Garen that he's gay? Seemed that way. Its too early to tell him how he feels. Then again, he could've thought Garen already knew how he felt and accidentally told him that he loved him. I can't wait to see what happens with Derek and what Garen says about the weird phone call. I just want to say that it was really gross reading about Cadyn and Kelsey making out and I hope that's what you were going for. . Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.
Was Cadyn gonna tell Garen that he's gay? Seemed that way. Its too early to tell him how he feels. Then again, he could've thought Garen already knew how he felt and accidentally told him that he loved him. I can't wait to see what happens with Derek and what Garen says about the weird phone call. I just want to say that it was really gross reading about Cadyn and Kelsey making out and I hope that's what you were going for. . Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.