for Stuck Between Pressed Pages Of A Scrapbook4/10/2009 c15 
1EllYouSeeWhy
We-hey fast updates make my life a little less depressing so thankyou and keep up the good work! :D:D Cadyn needs to have a go at him about the girl and the lockers thing.
1EllYouSeeWhyWe-hey fast updates make my life a little less depressing so thankyou and keep up the good work! :D:D Cadyn needs to have a go at him about the girl and the lockers thing.
4/10/2009 c15 kepteinen
ARGH. They get me so frustrated! D: They have to kiss and make up soon, dammit. Or I won't be a happy camper.
ARGH. They get me so frustrated! D: They have to kiss and make up soon, dammit. Or I won't be a happy camper.
4/9/2009 c15 acousticbruises
Suck at chapter naming my pansy freaking arse. I'm stealing that for part of a poem.
Noodles makes the world better.
I want them to kiss put more up SOON! Because you wub me tEh most? ;)
Suck at chapter naming my pansy freaking arse. I'm stealing that for part of a poem.
Noodles makes the world better.
I want them to kiss put more up SOON! Because you wub me tEh most? ;)
4/9/2009 c14 acousticbruises
Oi kid. Brilliant as usual. For some reasons parts of this reminded me of "A Separate Piece" go figure, have you ever read that? Much love.
Oi kid. Brilliant as usual. For some reasons parts of this reminded me of "A Separate Piece" go figure, have you ever read that? Much love.
4/8/2009 c14 xSadistxFujix
Oh my Jasper, SO CLOSE! Just... not close enough. Why? Did she have to inturrupt? It probably mightn't have happened any way though. LOVED this chapter!
Oh my Jasper, SO CLOSE! Just... not close enough. Why? Did she have to inturrupt? It probably mightn't have happened any way though. LOVED this chapter!
4/8/2009 c14 calamity jane
What an awesome story! Your writing is terrific, the story flows at a good pace and you've created some really interesting characters. Cadyn is just adorable, Garen is cool and of course Kelsey is pure evil! I also like C & G's relationship with their sister, Casey...nice job all around.
Keep up the great work and like everyone else I'm looking forward to your next update.
What an awesome story! Your writing is terrific, the story flows at a good pace and you've created some really interesting characters. Cadyn is just adorable, Garen is cool and of course Kelsey is pure evil! I also like C & G's relationship with their sister, Casey...nice job all around.
Keep up the great work and like everyone else I'm looking forward to your next update.
4/8/2009 c14 6CrimsonLilly
Ah the angst!It's killing me!
In a good way,though :)
And you managed to surprise me with all the Kelsey thing;I thought Cadyn was adamant about not dating her...And now he's actually going to try and go through with it...Poor Garen is all I can say to that. I love how you've made him slightly bipolar *giggles* now that he's realised he has quite an obsession with Cadyn. Argh! This seems to be never ending! They just keep going round and round in circles! If only I could just lock them up and not let them out for couple of days...then they'd definitely get somewhere.
I think they would? Heh
6CrimsonLillyAh the angst!It's killing me!
In a good way,though :)
And you managed to surprise me with all the Kelsey thing;I thought Cadyn was adamant about not dating her...And now he's actually going to try and go through with it...Poor Garen is all I can say to that. I love how you've made him slightly bipolar *giggles* now that he's realised he has quite an obsession with Cadyn. Argh! This seems to be never ending! They just keep going round and round in circles! If only I could just lock them up and not let them out for couple of days...then they'd definitely get somewhere.
I think they would? Heh
4/8/2009 c14 kepteinen
"Garen, Garen, Garen...the images kept on colliding with one another; Garen and I when we were nine and blowing out the candles on our birthday cake together holding hands was he wishing for the same thing I was?, Garen with his first girlfriend his first love, me rocking my brother back and forth as he mourned giving his heart to another he’ll never know that everything I said is everything I wish someone would say to me, Garen and his many fucks and pretty new girl my heart hurts."
What a beautiful paragraph.
"Garen, Garen, Garen...the images kept on colliding with one another; Garen and I when we were nine and blowing out the candles on our birthday cake together holding hands was he wishing for the same thing I was?, Garen with his first girlfriend his first love, me rocking my brother back and forth as he mourned giving his heart to another he’ll never know that everything I said is everything I wish someone would say to me, Garen and his many fucks and pretty new girl my heart hurts."
What a beautiful paragraph.
4/7/2009 c14 3VivaLaQueen
I'm seriously waiting the day they kiss.
I really want them to kiss or someone to take in charge and I think Garen is the one to do that.
I feel sad for Cadyn, he really loves his brother.
:] Great chapter!
Seriously, every time I log on I always look to my favorites to see if you updated a new chapter and I had a feeling today you would update it and I was correct!
Can't wait and see what happens to the next chapter!
3VivaLaQueenI'm seriously waiting the day they kiss.
I really want them to kiss or someone to take in charge and I think Garen is the one to do that.
I feel sad for Cadyn, he really loves his brother.
:] Great chapter!
Seriously, every time I log on I always look to my favorites to see if you updated a new chapter and I had a feeling today you would update it and I was correct!
Can't wait and see what happens to the next chapter!
4/7/2009 c14 StarAndStickerTape
Wonderful! i love to read BoyxBoy for the angsty-ness (if thats a word...) but i find the twin love HOT! sry I get excited! keep up the writing now that you have free time :)
Wonderful! i love to read BoyxBoy for the angsty-ness (if thats a word...) but i find the twin love HOT! sry I get excited! keep up the writing now that you have free time :)
4/7/2009 c14 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
you are the queen of anticipation.
I really hope by the fifteenth chapter Kelsey is somewhere at the bottom of the ocean while cadyn and garen make-out in their living room.
I know I said that you shouldn't change your pace...but they have to end up together eventually!
I'm going crazy!
but i love this story (as always) and will be on the edge of my seat until the next update
you are the queen of anticipation.
I really hope by the fifteenth chapter Kelsey is somewhere at the bottom of the ocean while cadyn and garen make-out in their living room.
I know I said that you shouldn't change your pace...but they have to end up together eventually!
I'm going crazy!
but i love this story (as always) and will be on the edge of my seat until the next update
4/7/2009 c14 HazeleyedHoney
YOU CHANGED THE RATING? I hope this means there will be some smex! . I can't believe Cadyn is going out with that biotch! Maybe this will give Garen the push he needs? Update as soon as you can.
YOU CHANGED THE RATING? I hope this means there will be some smex! . I can't believe Cadyn is going out with that biotch! Maybe this will give Garen the push he needs? Update as soon as you can.
3/31/2009 c13 1Desaki Akan
I'm happy to hear you're never stopping the story, haha...and...OH MY GOD, I HATE KELSEY. I JUST WANT TO SCRATCH THAT BITCH'S EYES OUT! SHE NEEDS TO DIE! Ahem. *Fixes hair and composes herself* Sorry about that. Kelsey does need to die though. I was this-close to jumping into my computer and strangling her, but I then remembered that that is impossible. Get back soon and fix things with the twins...please?
1Desaki AkanI'm happy to hear you're never stopping the story, haha...and...OH MY GOD, I HATE KELSEY. I JUST WANT TO SCRATCH THAT BITCH'S EYES OUT! SHE NEEDS TO DIE! Ahem. *Fixes hair and composes herself* Sorry about that. Kelsey does need to die though. I was this-close to jumping into my computer and strangling her, but I then remembered that that is impossible. Get back soon and fix things with the twins...please?