for Laura4/22/2008 c1 
197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was simply breathtaking. Really exquisite writing. Such a unique style.
~the Stranger in the moonlight
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was simply breathtaking. Really exquisite writing. Such a unique style.
~the Stranger in the moonlight
4/15/2008 c1 YUKI
I LOVE THIS PIECE! I REALLY WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME ENOUGH TO WRITE ME A LOVE POEM!
CHEERS!
I LOVE THIS PIECE! I REALLY WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME ENOUGH TO WRITE ME A LOVE POEM!
CHEERS!
4/13/2008 c1 Deli
nice poem. vocabulary is beyond wat a 15yr old should know.
whos laura? u sound like u lov her
nice poem. vocabulary is beyond wat a 15yr old should know.
whos laura? u sound like u lov her
2/18/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
the images in the piece are really great and it's very sweet... great job
612simpleplan13the images in the piece are really great and it's very sweet... great job
2/15/2008 c1 43lookin4nemo
wow. that is all i can really say...you're really good! have you read her this poem? i mean it is so awasoem and...just...wow. great job! nice similes, omg kepp it up!
43lookin4nemowow. that is all i can really say...you're really good! have you read her this poem? i mean it is so awasoem and...just...wow. great job! nice similes, omg kepp it up!
2/15/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Haven't heard from you in a while. This is amazing, as always. This girl means the world to you, I can tell. very, very nice poem. Discriptive, emotional, passionate, I got goosebumps. Marvelous. Great work. Keep writing.
82Billie.JoelleHaven't heard from you in a while. This is amazing, as always. This girl means the world to you, I can tell. very, very nice poem. Discriptive, emotional, passionate, I got goosebumps. Marvelous. Great work. Keep writing.
2/15/2008 c1 76Kaia Zeffirelli
WOW! Amazing, as usual! I love it! Just awesome word choice and description... It paints a picture in my mind very clearly. Love the line, "Her eyes carve my heart, etched with her name; Laura". Great job! Keep it up!
-Katrina
76Kaia ZeffirelliWOW! Amazing, as usual! I love it! Just awesome word choice and description... It paints a picture in my mind very clearly. Love the line, "Her eyes carve my heart, etched with her name; Laura". Great job! Keep it up!
-Katrina