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4/22/2008 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was simply breathtaking. Really exquisite writing. Such a unique style.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
4/15/2008 c1 YUKI
I LOVE THIS PIECE! I REALLY WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME ENOUGH TO WRITE ME A LOVE POEM!

CHEERS!
4/13/2008 c1 Deli
nice poem. vocabulary is beyond wat a 15yr old should know.

whos laura? u sound like u lov her
2/18/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
the images in the piece are really great and it's very sweet... great job
2/15/2008 c1 43lookin4nemo
wow. that is all i can really say...you're really good! have you read her this poem? i mean it is so awasoem and...just...wow. great job! nice similes, omg kepp it up!
2/15/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Haven't heard from you in a while. This is amazing, as always. This girl means the world to you, I can tell. very, very nice poem. Discriptive, emotional, passionate, I got goosebumps. Marvelous. Great work. Keep writing.
2/15/2008 c1 76Kaia Zeffirelli
WOW! Amazing, as usual! I love it! Just awesome word choice and description... It paints a picture in my mind very clearly. Love the line, "Her eyes carve my heart, etched with her name; Laura". Great job! Keep it up!

-Katrina

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