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6/27/2008 c1 91son of frost
Amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. You have a very unique style and perspective. Just a brief suggestion; when using a metaphor, make sure that it works completely or enough to make the point it's intended to. "Oh, if love is truly blind then this marks its epitome." I didn't understand how the epitome of Love's blindness was marked in this case. That was the only shortcoming I found. I enjoyed the Man of La Mancha/ Don Quixote allusion, and if you haven't seen it yet, watch Hayao Miyazaki's rendition of Howl's Moving Castle. It has imagery that relates directly to this piece. P.S. Thanks for the review!
2/17/2008 c1 17jennyferlau
wow this was AMAZING!

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