for Mother, Mother3/28/2008 c1 
63Midnight Adrenaline
Pretty good, although there are a couple of mistakes:
"And why do I ask you these questions?
When you never answer me."
should be:
"And why do I ask you these questions,
when you never answer me."
and you forgot the apostrophee in "it's" once.
Sorry, spotting mistakes is something I do easily.
63Midnight AdrenalinePretty good, although there are a couple of mistakes:
"And why do I ask you these questions?
When you never answer me."
should be:
"And why do I ask you these questions,
when you never answer me."
and you forgot the apostrophee in "it's" once.
Sorry, spotting mistakes is something I do easily.
2/17/2008 c1 4MidnyghtVampyrezz
Oh, God, Jordan I'm so sorry. I have no idea what you're going through, but I know it's hell. Again, if ever you need to vent, you can call or text me.
4MidnyghtVampyrezzOh, God, Jordan I'm so sorry. I have no idea what you're going through, but I know it's hell. Again, if ever you need to vent, you can call or text me.