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3/28/2008 c1 63Midnight Adrenaline
Pretty good, although there are a couple of mistakes:

"And why do I ask you these questions?

When you never answer me."

should be:

"And why do I ask you these questions,

when you never answer me."

and you forgot the apostrophee in "it's" once.

Sorry, spotting mistakes is something I do easily.
2/17/2008 c1 4MidnyghtVampyrezz
Oh, God, Jordan I'm so sorry. I have no idea what you're going through, but I know it's hell. Again, if ever you need to vent, you can call or text me.

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