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4/6/2006 c1 33admiresher
this is a beautiful poem. loving the image of a lone star untouched by the darkness. great poem.
7/25/2005 c1 1worthyornot
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7/4/2001 c1 18Adar Daath
Do the other stars represent people appearing around you for support, or the blinding backdrop of the world, so only the memory of individuality can maintain said individuality? (Or am I way off...) Regardless, well done. I like this a lot.
5/14/2001 c1 15midnight theif
VERY GOOD! I like how you compare the star to you. I'm sort of a loner myself so I know what it means :)
5/7/2001 c1 18Adar Daath
Marvelous, but is alone the same as lonely?
4/22/2001 c1 41kikei
ohhhhhhh... I really like this one. somehow, poems about loneliness always speak to me, as cheesy as that just sounded! I really liked it, tho... keep it up!
4/21/2001 c1 21the goddess of the underworld
wow! that was really good! i really liked your analogy of yourself and a star. you are very talented, keep writing! }:P

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