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8WithoutException
I really like this one too! It seems you have a thing for somewhat "gender confused" nicknames, which is cool. I really like "Will" for Wilma, though. I haven't heard that one before.
I really like this so far - Mike is really funny, and I completely empathize with the non-athletic PE thing. I hated PE. And I had a sexist gym teacher (who was also homophobic, but so was everyone else in my high school...). This is a great start, please continue!
8WithoutExceptionI really like this one too! It seems you have a thing for somewhat "gender confused" nicknames, which is cool. I really like "Will" for Wilma, though. I haven't heard that one before.
I really like this so far - Mike is really funny, and I completely empathize with the non-athletic PE thing. I hated PE. And I had a sexist gym teacher (who was also homophobic, but so was everyone else in my high school...). This is a great start, please continue!
2/19/2008 c1 6Shadowed and Shattered
I loved this chapter. I think you did a really good job of introducing Will, and Mike seems really funny. I wish I'd read this chapter before I was finished with gym. :D
6Shadowed and ShatteredI loved this chapter. I think you did a really good job of introducing Will, and Mike seems really funny. I wish I'd read this chapter before I was finished with gym. :D
2/18/2008 c1 3I Quoth Nevermore
Brilliant. It's so realistic. I'm not quite sure if Mike is the love interest in the story, or the actual love interest will be revealed in the next chapter. Anyways, update soon!
3I Quoth NevermoreBrilliant. It's so realistic. I'm not quite sure if Mike is the love interest in the story, or the actual love interest will be revealed in the next chapter. Anyways, update soon!