
2/25/2008 c1
42SickButPretty
The intro before he mentions the slippers borders on long, but I really love the wistfulness and the regret for the old man, it's quite sweet. My fav paragraph is the second last one.

The intro before he mentions the slippers borders on long, but I really love the wistfulness and the regret for the old man, it's quite sweet. My fav paragraph is the second last one.
2/21/2008 c1 coolreb
I love this so much! Good luck for the competition (I saw smily face on it so that's gotta be good!
I love this so much! Good luck for the competition (I saw smily face on it so that's gotta be good!
2/19/2008 c1 Jasper Mace
Sentimental. Kind of crude - the strain to get this within the word limit shows.
Sentimental. Kind of crude - the strain to get this within the word limit shows.