for The Kingless King, The Day After2/20/2008 c1 
61AuthorNinjaEarth
While this is a rather interesting prose, the imagery, descriptions and the language is very cool. The problem is that no one really understands what this is suppose to be. According to your profile, you are writing in code. While I know "I don't get it", exactly how many people will if you write in code? Does that defeat the purpose of communicating your message effectively? Just my observations; take no offense, but just sharing my thoughts. You did a great job though. Thank you!
61AuthorNinjaEarthWhile this is a rather interesting prose, the imagery, descriptions and the language is very cool. The problem is that no one really understands what this is suppose to be. According to your profile, you are writing in code. While I know "I don't get it", exactly how many people will if you write in code? Does that defeat the purpose of communicating your message effectively? Just my observations; take no offense, but just sharing my thoughts. You did a great job though. Thank you!