for Deceptive Vow3/30/2019 c3 zagato
They're really fast, I don't know if people can marry as fast here, maybe in two weeks at the soonest.
They're really fast, I don't know if people can marry as fast here, maybe in two weeks at the soonest.
3/29/2019 c1 zagato
Hi, I came here on this story after finishing Finding Grey and reading a review there about this story. Thank you for writing!
Hi, I came here on this story after finishing Finding Grey and reading a review there about this story. Thank you for writing!
4/18/2016 c29 
75AlysonSerenaStone
I really, really did enjoy this story! I thought it was well written with just the right amount of romance and history! Nice work!
75AlysonSerenaStoneI really, really did enjoy this story! I thought it was well written with just the right amount of romance and history! Nice work!
10/18/2015 c5 B
JUST MARRY HER ALREADY! Oh, wait. Lol.
JUST MARRY HER ALREADY! Oh, wait. Lol.
10/18/2015 c1 B
Definitely a good start. I have to admit the summary has me curious.
Definitely a good start. I have to admit the summary has me curious.
1/17/2015 c29 51Brievel
The writing at the beginning was not quite up to my usual standards, choppy sentences, a little hesitance, and I'll admit on the second chapter I considered quitting. However I could see real talent under the hesitance and I liked the plot, so I hung on. A few chapters later it was picking up spectacularly. The characters are excellently designed, the story is well-written, it moves just quickly enough but not too quickly. I really enjoyed it (even put off updating my browser so I wouldn't have to flip through again to find it!) and it is officially now one of my favorites.
51BrievelThe writing at the beginning was not quite up to my usual standards, choppy sentences, a little hesitance, and I'll admit on the second chapter I considered quitting. However I could see real talent under the hesitance and I liked the plot, so I hung on. A few chapters later it was picking up spectacularly. The characters are excellently designed, the story is well-written, it moves just quickly enough but not too quickly. I really enjoyed it (even put off updating my browser so I wouldn't have to flip through again to find it!) and it is officially now one of my favorites.
1/16/2015 c11 Brievel
It feels a little strange to cheer on characters when I know the story is complete but...I sure hope they end up together! (Not that I've ever noticed any cheering to actually change an author's mind...)
It feels a little strange to cheer on characters when I know the story is complete but...I sure hope they end up together! (Not that I've ever noticed any cheering to actually change an author's mind...)
1/16/2015 c9 Brievel
I like it very much, just as much as I've liked the rest of that story. I tend to not review the first few chapters, so I can get a grip on the characters and plotline first. I do like it, I like the characters, I like the plot, and it's rare that I like all the characters *and* the plot as well. Although I don't trust that Daniel, stealing a kiss from a married woman...
I like it very much, just as much as I've liked the rest of that story. I tend to not review the first few chapters, so I can get a grip on the characters and plotline first. I do like it, I like the characters, I like the plot, and it's rare that I like all the characters *and* the plot as well. Although I don't trust that Daniel, stealing a kiss from a married woman...
10/11/2013 c16 Guest
...is she serious? A grown woman throwing a fit because a man didn't want to have sex with her? Trying to starve him for three weeks because of bitterness and pride? To top it off, a man who told her he didn't want to do something with her she would regret? Sure she's drowning in her grief andletting herself be a husk of a woman who neither works nor eats but she's also degrading sex to something used to forget about her grandmother's death for a few minutes? ...wow.
...is she serious? A grown woman throwing a fit because a man didn't want to have sex with her? Trying to starve him for three weeks because of bitterness and pride? To top it off, a man who told her he didn't want to do something with her she would regret? Sure she's drowning in her grief andletting herself be a husk of a woman who neither works nor eats but she's also degrading sex to something used to forget about her grandmother's death for a few minutes? ...wow.