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6/8/2008 c1 emptyemptyemptyempty
Hrm...I feel like this was a bit to repetitive, which for a poem sometimes works, but seems...forced here. I like the idea behind the poem, however. I always love panty -twist phrases.

Jojo
6/1/2008 c1 12BlackestOpal
Ooh, I like it.

It's so true. People get worked up over nothing.

Great job.
4/20/2008 c1 174a silenced revolution
it's truly bizarre that they added you to their hate list for that. people are strange creatures.

anyway, it does read more like a rant to me than a poem. the 'panties in a twist' and 'why this drama' lines seem too long for the rest.
3/11/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the ending a lot.. and I like the idea as well... the only thing is the repetition because you say a lot of the same things more than once. I think making it less repetitive and maybe adding some newer ways of expressing the emotion might help
2/20/2008 c1 Julius Gillian
This reads more like a rant than a poem.
2/19/2008 c1 3Minuit Sunryze Lili
Es say go bella! and i concur with her and u! RAWR! grls are dumb! any who i like it.

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