for Last Year2/25/2008 c1 
145BellonaFlayreRiver
the emotion behind this doesnt cloud the words or overpower the reader, yet you can feel it surrounding you as the words flow through your mind. lovely.
145BellonaFlayreRiverthe emotion behind this doesnt cloud the words or overpower the reader, yet you can feel it surrounding you as the words flow through your mind. lovely.
2/22/2008 c1 HelpWanted11
I love the imagery and the emotive quality to this piece. Also the repetition of the word "Fast" seemed to add to the poem.
Keep writing,
HelpWanted11
I love the imagery and the emotive quality to this piece. Also the repetition of the word "Fast" seemed to add to the poem.
Keep writing,
HelpWanted11
2/21/2008 c1 24Jon Blue
wow. that was good assignment. not sure about the title...doesn't hold enough of a bond with the essence of the poem.
_the setting sun tapped my shoulder
and reminded me to slow down.
amazing.
_Thumb the pages back a year
Love it.
_four hours of prayers for your life.
excellent.
_Fast,
like you driving us home,
rounding corners cautionless,
the day the family fell apart.
brilliance.
_Foot off the pedal.
Now I'm slowing down.
a most fitting ending...you rock! thanks, that was a enjoying read, anyway, hey
hey well I'm hoping you have like a copy of the reaper, because I can't seem to find it on the internet and I would very much like to read where the idea behind this came from, well anyway enjoying read, keep up the good work.
24Jon Bluewow. that was good assignment. not sure about the title...doesn't hold enough of a bond with the essence of the poem.
_the setting sun tapped my shoulder
and reminded me to slow down.
amazing.
_Thumb the pages back a year
Love it.
_four hours of prayers for your life.
excellent.
_Fast,
like you driving us home,
rounding corners cautionless,
the day the family fell apart.
brilliance.
_Foot off the pedal.
Now I'm slowing down.
a most fitting ending...you rock! thanks, that was a enjoying read, anyway, hey
hey well I'm hoping you have like a copy of the reaper, because I can't seem to find it on the internet and I would very much like to read where the idea behind this came from, well anyway enjoying read, keep up the good work.