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2/25/2008 c1 145BellonaFlayreRiver
the emotion behind this doesnt cloud the words or overpower the reader, yet you can feel it surrounding you as the words flow through your mind. lovely.
2/23/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I knew I recognized that line.. lol I
2/22/2008 c1 HelpWanted11
I love the imagery and the emotive quality to this piece. Also the repetition of the word "Fast" seemed to add to the poem.

Keep writing,

HelpWanted11
2/21/2008 c1 24Jon Blue
wow. that was good assignment. not sure about the title...doesn't hold enough of a bond with the essence of the poem.

_the setting sun tapped my shoulder

and reminded me to slow down.

amazing.

_Thumb the pages back a year

Love it.

_four hours of prayers for your life.

excellent.

_Fast,

like you driving us home,

rounding corners cautionless,

the day the family fell apart.

brilliance.

_Foot off the pedal.

Now I'm slowing down.

a most fitting ending...you rock! thanks, that was a enjoying read, anyway, hey

hey well I'm hoping you have like a copy of the reaper, because I can't seem to find it on the internet and I would very much like to read where the idea behind this came from, well anyway enjoying read, keep up the good work.

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