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2/20/2008 c1 75False Pretense
I know how this feels...Only the bullets were shot at me instead of from me.

My favorite line was:

"Then I'll tickle you with chirpy strings

And the joy you'll feel belongs to me."

I ♥ it.
2/20/2008 c1 460Time To Change
good use of words. calmly vicious undertones.
2/20/2008 c1 Julius Gillian
This rings with a very humanely selfish truth.

I assume by this piece the author realizes that he or she can get away with doing immoral acts and not feel anything for it.

What do you think of that? I'm curious.

This is well worded.

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