for End of the World4/6/2009 c1 
3Anselm The Fallen
I love anything that has to do with the end of the world it enjoyably depressing and i love that about that the rhyme structure was superb and was only halfway through and i bookmarked it.
3Anselm The FallenI love anything that has to do with the end of the world it enjoyably depressing and i love that about that the rhyme structure was superb and was only halfway through and i bookmarked it.
8/16/2008 c1 103Jesse the Storyteller
I like the rhythm and the sing-song feeling of this poem. It stands in contrast to the serious nature of the things being described, so it sounds like you're almost mocking the destruction that's happening. Nice effect!
"Don’t hold back for others, for same it’s too late" do you mean some? Also in that same stanza... nowhere is one word.
"But how can time win when it fights against fate?" ... I love how you throw in these beautiful lines in the midst of this poem. They are deep and make you think. I like them a lot.
Very wonderful poem. The describing words are excellent. Great job!
-Jesse
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103Jesse the StorytellerI like the rhythm and the sing-song feeling of this poem. It stands in contrast to the serious nature of the things being described, so it sounds like you're almost mocking the destruction that's happening. Nice effect!
"Don’t hold back for others, for same it’s too late" do you mean some? Also in that same stanza... nowhere is one word.
"But how can time win when it fights against fate?" ... I love how you throw in these beautiful lines in the midst of this poem. They are deep and make you think. I like them a lot.
Very wonderful poem. The describing words are excellent. Great job!
-Jesse
Attack of the review marathon! (link in my profile)
4/11/2008 c1 17Azena Kira
AMAZING poetry! Seriously! I really loved it. Great job! Keep writing. =]
-Azena
17Azena KiraAMAZING poetry! Seriously! I really loved it. Great job! Keep writing. =]
-Azena
2/26/2008 c1 6Requiem -Inori
Wow. Amazing. I've read quite a few written works about "The End" but this one can really turn heads.
6Requiem -InoriWow. Amazing. I've read quite a few written works about "The End" but this one can really turn heads.