for My Life is a Soap Opera2/24/2008 c1 Fractured Illusion
" AKA hell on wheels"
*laughs* That's a funny way of putting it!
"but I am 99 sure"
99 percent?
Anyhow, it was a really charming read, but I cannot help but feel that it grew a bit bland. The start was awesome. But middle to end was weaker.
This definitely have potential, though, so keep it up!
- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
" AKA hell on wheels"
*laughs* That's a funny way of putting it!
"but I am 99 sure"
99 percent?
Anyhow, it was a really charming read, but I cannot help but feel that it grew a bit bland. The start was awesome. But middle to end was weaker.
This definitely have potential, though, so keep it up!
- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2/23/2008 c1 asklefjaeihog
Review Marathon! (link in my profile)
I absolutely love this. I find it so hilarious that Lindsay is aware that her life is like a soap opera, but she's all like "None of this is my fault!" And I like how you pull the soap opera elements out and made it part of her life, but still developed it into something interesting.
Just a few technical errors. "...and when Eli I looked into Eli’s dark hazel eyes as I said my vows..." That's probably not what you meant to write. But no biggie ^.^
-Rachel
Review Marathon! (link in my profile)
I absolutely love this. I find it so hilarious that Lindsay is aware that her life is like a soap opera, but she's all like "None of this is my fault!" And I like how you pull the soap opera elements out and made it part of her life, but still developed it into something interesting.
Just a few technical errors. "...and when Eli I looked into Eli’s dark hazel eyes as I said my vows..." That's probably not what you meant to write. But no biggie ^.^
-Rachel
2/23/2008 c1 
42SickButPretty
I really like this. It's lively, has got a real bite to it. I shall follow it in the future providing I'm not swamped with school. Ps is Zeke supposed to be a teenager? Just wondering.
42SickButPrettyI really like this. It's lively, has got a real bite to it. I shall follow it in the future providing I'm not swamped with school. Ps is Zeke supposed to be a teenager? Just wondering.