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for I am Nothing

3/6/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I like your poetry. It's really nice.
7/13/2008 c1 1aryawolf13
This feeling is so...I can't explain it.

If you've been through this, then you are one tough nut. I..know..what it's like. :S

I love your writing. This poem...it's so simple, but it touches you. Your simplicity makes the writing come out as...honest. And I love that.

Aryawolf13
6/29/2008 c1 3Trivia Malcolm
Definitely a very emotional poem, something I all too easily relate to. I also like the way it flows so easily, and I'm a sucker for a good rhyme. Nice job! That coming from a person who isn't a fan of poetry.
3/1/2008 c1 32Star the Foxhound
Nice poem, you are a good writer.
2/27/2008 c1 12XxAntagonistxX
good job!.

That is cute.
2/23/2008 c1 1Axdents-Happen
T_T beautiful
2/23/2008 c1 4Storming Leaves
Good poem, slightly reduced by the rhyming of the same word, might i suggest free verse?
2/23/2008 c1 11ziploc
dang! wow that poem was soo good. It made me want to cry it was like sad and all but it was so good.

Ziploc
2/23/2008 c1 26That Green Gentlewoman
dude, i know how that feels. i can totally relate. i wish i could offer some better sympathy or words of hope, but nothing good came out of my story;so im out. :)

but keep writing, i like your style.
2/23/2008 c1 28surrealphobia
I really liked this poem and the way it flowed without sounding repetative. If this is your poem I think you're off to a pretty good start.

((How the haunt my mind, how they haunt my dreams:))

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