for The boy in back of class7/21/2010 c1 
75thewhimsicalbard
Haha. Wow. I like this one. It's funny and I like reading pieces about the semi-awkward yet at the same time alluring and rampant nature of teenage sexuality. You did a good job. It's a little kinky, but hey, I can deal with that.
But how, you ask, did you know he was horny? I know how-it's the same way all girls figure out a guy is horny.
You looked down. Duh.
-thewhimsicalbard
75thewhimsicalbardHaha. Wow. I like this one. It's funny and I like reading pieces about the semi-awkward yet at the same time alluring and rampant nature of teenage sexuality. You did a good job. It's a little kinky, but hey, I can deal with that.
But how, you ask, did you know he was horny? I know how-it's the same way all girls figure out a guy is horny.
You looked down. Duh.
-thewhimsicalbard
3/26/2008 c1 1iLone
I liked it, it was really descriptive even though it was so short. Wish I could write like this...
1iLoneI liked it, it was really descriptive even though it was so short. Wish I could write like this...
2/23/2008 c1 1Toast and Stitch
Sexy, but if this is straight, I refuse to read further or tell you I love it...
1Toast and StitchSexy, but if this is straight, I refuse to read further or tell you I love it...
2/23/2008 c1 4notoriousreviewer
*is confused* Why is this story labeled "humor"?
Otherwise, I like. Though the cigarettes would just give me a headache...
4notoriousreviewer*is confused* Why is this story labeled "humor"?
Otherwise, I like. Though the cigarettes would just give me a headache...
2/23/2008 c1 11anxiouslyD
Hehehehe I love how it ended. This piece is pretty amazing just for the fact alone that you can write such things (like about the scab) with such honesty and... your writing doesn't feel inhibited, you know? Bravo.
11anxiouslyDHehehehe I love how it ended. This piece is pretty amazing just for the fact alone that you can write such things (like about the scab) with such honesty and... your writing doesn't feel inhibited, you know? Bravo.