
1/7/2009 c3
9Narq
Wow! This story is really interesting, and you've created the characters really really well! I could practically feel the girl's fury.
Narq.

Wow! This story is really interesting, and you've created the characters really really well! I could practically feel the girl's fury.
Narq.
2/25/2008 c1 The Sun and Shadow
Aww, it's sad that Sariah and her brother are being separated.
This was a very nice start. You are quite the talented writer. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Aww, it's sad that Sariah and her brother are being separated.
This was a very nice start. You are quite the talented writer. I can't wait to read the next chapter!