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3/14/2008 c1 89Shadows in the Fire
Oh, this IS interesting! I love the connection between stepping towards the light which, in turn, would stomp out the sun. Also, the words "lurching and reeling" work amazing in the middle part of the poem. Lastly, there's a weird comma between matter and minded, but that's a small worry. Great poem-there is feeling in it, Koruneko!

Thanks for the review and the favorite,

-Shadow
2/26/2008 c1 9LONELYxTAG
I really like it. The idea is somewhat hidden in the context, but I think you did a good job. I really think you should carry on, though. I don't think the idea is completely clear though. Let me know!
2/26/2008 c1 1Generation Dead
That was great.

I really liked it.!

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