for Hey You8/31/2008 c1 
1Kneecap
I haven't reviewed you in ages, so I thought I would ^^.
I liked the repetition of 'hey you', and I felt the poem had a strong rhyme scheme. It was quite sad, and for some reason it reminded me of the way Ennis treated Alma in Brokeback Mountain, even though there aren't that many similarities. Eh, it's just what came to mind.
But the last couple of lines "Keep me in your dreams
It’s the only place we meet" made me think the speaker was dead!
1KneecapI haven't reviewed you in ages, so I thought I would ^^.
I liked the repetition of 'hey you', and I felt the poem had a strong rhyme scheme. It was quite sad, and for some reason it reminded me of the way Ennis treated Alma in Brokeback Mountain, even though there aren't that many similarities. Eh, it's just what came to mind.
But the last couple of lines "Keep me in your dreams
It’s the only place we meet" made me think the speaker was dead!
3/4/2008 c1 2DLG903
This rocked. :)
I mean ROCKED.
And yeah, all the so-called "mature" writers would be all 'This is an amazing work of literature and I impress on you to write more poetry', but I GET THAT OUT OF THE WORD "ROCKED"!
I love you, honey
2DLG903This rocked. :)
I mean ROCKED.
And yeah, all the so-called "mature" writers would be all 'This is an amazing work of literature and I impress on you to write more poetry', but I GET THAT OUT OF THE WORD "ROCKED"!
I love you, honey
2/26/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Oh my goodness. This is amazing. You did a wonderful job describing both the emotions and the actions of the couple. Amazing, truly. Keep writing!
82Billie.JoelleOh my goodness. This is amazing. You did a wonderful job describing both the emotions and the actions of the couple. Amazing, truly. Keep writing!
2/26/2008 c1 50In the Rye
I wanted to review but I don't have much to say about it. I liked it though.
50In the RyeI wanted to review but I don't have much to say about it. I liked it though.