for An experiment in Character driven plot5/6/2008 c8 dinodaw
Well thats the end of it to bad difo was my hero anywho great story
Keep on wrighting
Well thats the end of it to bad difo was my hero anywho great story
Keep on wrighting
5/4/2008 c8 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
NO!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-! This story is AWESOME, I mean, I loved the way you ended it, but still! WHY!-! WHY CRU-EL FATE! I CANNOT believe you ended this, I honestly didn't notice the breaks between chapters! PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF I CAN USE! (I usually don't read stories rated T or M) and you have an AWESOME sense of humor!
WRITE ON! (No, SERIOUSLY.)
Pen.Dragon
NO!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-! This story is AWESOME, I mean, I loved the way you ended it, but still! WHY!-! WHY CRU-EL FATE! I CANNOT believe you ended this, I honestly didn't notice the breaks between chapters! PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF I CAN USE! (I usually don't read stories rated T or M) and you have an AWESOME sense of humor!
WRITE ON! (No, SERIOUSLY.)
Pen.Dragon
5/2/2008 c8 
2Double AA
Narrartion? You should have them all narrarate the next story you write!(not the one we're working on though) I can't believe it's over, well yeah, I actualy can since you've been talking about ending it for a while. Loved the bits about what happend to them at the end.
Keep Writing!
Double A
2Double AANarrartion? You should have them all narrarate the next story you write!(not the one we're working on though) I can't believe it's over, well yeah, I actualy can since you've been talking about ending it for a while. Loved the bits about what happend to them at the end.
Keep Writing!
Double A
5/2/2008 c8 15blackberrydream
Aw, I'm sad that it's over but still really great story. Absolutely hilarious!
15blackberrydreamAw, I'm sad that it's over but still really great story. Absolutely hilarious!
5/2/2008 c8 71Bob Evans
Skip the experiment in Naration, and go straight to "An Experiment in Correct Spelling". My goodness, how many times did I see the word "progect"? I have a little "ProJECT" for you, Mr. RED...learn how to spell!
Heheheh, okay, now that I'm done abusing you, I thought this was quite amusing. Thumbs up and kudos, even if you don't know how to hit the spell checker button.
~The one and only Bob Evans
71Bob EvansSkip the experiment in Naration, and go straight to "An Experiment in Correct Spelling". My goodness, how many times did I see the word "progect"? I have a little "ProJECT" for you, Mr. RED...learn how to spell!
Heheheh, okay, now that I'm done abusing you, I thought this was quite amusing. Thumbs up and kudos, even if you don't know how to hit the spell checker button.
~The one and only Bob Evans
4/14/2008 c6 6Ms. Critic
Yes, exactly! You read my mind! And Chris sounds like a guy i could get along with. Great line: YOU SHALL BURN!
Keep writin'!
...~mc;P~...
6Ms. CriticYes, exactly! You read my mind! And Chris sounds like a guy i could get along with. Great line: YOU SHALL BURN!
Keep writin'!
...~mc;P~...
4/14/2008 c5 Ms. Critic
Hilarious! So do they ALL live together? and who is this mysterious ugly bf of kale's?
Keep writing!
...~mc;P~...
Hilarious! So do they ALL live together? and who is this mysterious ugly bf of kale's?
Keep writing!
...~mc;P~...
4/4/2008 c7 2Double AA
lol. Zuby returns! I was afraid he was dead or something. I want some eggzes!
Keep Writing!
Double A
P.S. I loved Mr. Rogers!
2Double AAlol. Zuby returns! I was afraid he was dead or something. I want some eggzes!
Keep Writing!
Double A
P.S. I loved Mr. Rogers!
4/3/2008 c7 15blackberrydream
Oh god, this is the best chapter yet! This plot is just so ridiculously pointless! I love it! Chris having an allegic reaction to mr. Roger's theme song was so great. That made my day!
-blackberrydream
15blackberrydreamOh god, this is the best chapter yet! This plot is just so ridiculously pointless! I love it! Chris having an allegic reaction to mr. Roger's theme song was so great. That made my day!
-blackberrydream
4/3/2008 c7 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
LOL! That was SO cool! It's weird how well I'm getting to know these characters!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
LOL! That was SO cool! It's weird how well I'm getting to know these characters!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
4/3/2008 c7 71Bob Evans
I don't know wtf a "thyme" is, but I'm pretty sure you meant "theme". Although, when you said, "How many characters does it take to save the world", I was expecting something a little more...epic.
At least we found Zuby again.
~The one and only Bob Evans
71Bob EvansI don't know wtf a "thyme" is, but I'm pretty sure you meant "theme". Although, when you said, "How many characters does it take to save the world", I was expecting something a little more...epic.
At least we found Zuby again.
~The one and only Bob Evans
4/2/2008 c6 15blackberrydream
Oh god, this is so funny! So completely random and it only makes sense just enough for me to follow along. I love it! Sate is the best!
15blackberrydreamOh god, this is so funny! So completely random and it only makes sense just enough for me to follow along. I love it! Sate is the best!
4/1/2008 c6 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
Well done, and I was kinda confused, but that's just from the random humor like whatever it was that Difo said at the beginning. I really hope the Chris isn't in more chapters, he's not as fun as the other characters. Anyway, I really enjoyed it!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
Well done, and I was kinda confused, but that's just from the random humor like whatever it was that Difo said at the beginning. I really hope the Chris isn't in more chapters, he's not as fun as the other characters. Anyway, I really enjoyed it!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon