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5/6/2008 c8 dinodaw
Well thats the end of it to bad difo was my hero anywho great story

Keep on wrighting
5/4/2008 c8 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
NO!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-! This story is AWESOME, I mean, I loved the way you ended it, but still! WHY!-! WHY CRU-EL FATE! I CANNOT believe you ended this, I honestly didn't notice the breaks between chapters! PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF I CAN USE! (I usually don't read stories rated T or M) and you have an AWESOME sense of humor!


5/2/2008 c8 2Double AA
Narrartion? You should have them all narrarate the next story you write!(not the one we're working on though) I can't believe it's over, well yeah, I actualy can since you've been talking about ending it for a while. Loved the bits about what happend to them at the end.

Keep Writing!

Double A
5/2/2008 c8 8heartfeltlove
The end! ^.^

This was hilarious!

I can't wait to read your next story!
5/2/2008 c8 15blackberrydream
Aw, I'm sad that it's over but still really great story. Absolutely hilarious!
5/2/2008 c8 70Bob Evans
Skip the experiment in Naration, and go straight to "An Experiment in Correct Spelling". My goodness, how many times did I see the word "progect"? I have a little "ProJECT" for you, Mr. RED...learn how to spell!

Heheheh, okay, now that I'm done abusing you, I thought this was quite amusing. Thumbs up and kudos, even if you don't know how to hit the spell checker button.

~The one and only Bob Evans
4/14/2008 c6 6Ms. Critic
Yes, exactly! You read my mind! And Chris sounds like a guy i could get along with. Great line: YOU SHALL BURN!

Keep writin'!

4/14/2008 c5 Ms. Critic
Hilarious! So do they ALL live together? and who is this mysterious ugly bf of kale's?

Keep writing!

4/4/2008 c7 2Double AA
lol. Zuby returns! I was afraid he was dead or something. I want some eggzes!

Keep Writing!

Double A

P.S. I loved Mr. Rogers!
4/3/2008 c7 15blackberrydream
Oh god, this is the best chapter yet! This plot is just so ridiculously pointless! I love it! Chris having an allegic reaction to mr. Roger's theme song was so great. That made my day!

4/3/2008 c7 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
LOL! That was SO cool! It's weird how well I'm getting to know these characters!

Write on!

4/3/2008 c7 70Bob Evans
I don't know wtf a "thyme" is, but I'm pretty sure you meant "theme". Although, when you said, "How many characters does it take to save the world", I was expecting something a little more...epic.

At least we found Zuby again.

~The one and only Bob Evans
4/2/2008 c6 15blackberrydream
Oh god, this is so funny! So completely random and it only makes sense just enough for me to follow along. I love it! Sate is the best!
4/1/2008 c1 8heartfeltlove
Vixo is hilarious!
4/1/2008 c6 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
Well done, and I was kinda confused, but that's just from the random humor like whatever it was that Difo said at the beginning. I really hope the Chris isn't in more chapters, he's not as fun as the other characters. Anyway, I really enjoyed it!

Write on!

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