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4/5/2008 c1 31ByYourSide
I like your style-jagged, but it flows really well. And I like the idea and overall theme of it. It reminded me of a fracture from a song. ^^
3/26/2008 c1 2KhefriSun
Wow, I really like the ryhming scheme in this one.
3/23/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the idea of this and it flows really well.. the only thing is the rhyming scheme confused me a bit, but other than that really awesome piece
3/21/2008 c1 7Rooster Skull
Another wonderful poem. Your really an excellent writer, you know. Anyway, December has to be my favourite month.

"I dry my tears to remember/The cold months of december"

Favourite lines. So amazing.

~~ AmarokUchiha ~~
2/28/2008 c1 HelpWanted11
Short but sweet and so powerful. This poem is amazing. You're an awesome writer. I really likethe rhythymic quality of this piece. I love it.

Keep writing,

HelpWanted11
2/27/2008 c1 59radioactive stanica
Let me know if there are any spelling errors or if something needs to be fixed on the poem. I would love to have your feedback. I don't think it is that great of a poem, but I just wanted to post it. I have not been to this site for awhile, so I wanna say, "I love you all and I wish you the best."

Thanks so much.

XOXO

TSP

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