for Why5/1/2008 c1 ros
I loved it haha, how a small incident in life and you could spin out a story for it. Just felt that it was a little choppy (the flow) cause it was all short sentences. The ironic thing is that I liked the short sentences too, maybe just not too much of it all.
WOOTZ YI JI BANG LA love it :)
I loved it haha, how a small incident in life and you could spin out a story for it. Just felt that it was a little choppy (the flow) cause it was all short sentences. The ironic thing is that I liked the short sentences too, maybe just not too much of it all.
WOOTZ YI JI BANG LA love it :)
5/1/2008 c1 cel1927
xD i just realized that i havent reviewed.
i dont care if this doesnt count or not
you should make this have a happy ending D: its so sad just like this. so many questions yet none of them answered ):
or... you could make this a two-shot xD so UPDATE SOON OKAY *dingdong* i just made your decision for you :D happy ending i want happy endings! (im sure joanne does too
xD i just realized that i havent reviewed.
i dont care if this doesnt count or not
you should make this have a happy ending D: its so sad just like this. so many questions yet none of them answered ):
or... you could make this a two-shot xD so UPDATE SOON OKAY *dingdong* i just made your decision for you :D happy ending i want happy endings! (im sure joanne does too
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