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5/1/2008 c1 ros
I loved it haha, how a small incident in life and you could spin out a story for it. Just felt that it was a little choppy (the flow) cause it was all short sentences. The ironic thing is that I liked the short sentences too, maybe just not too much of it all.

WOOTZ YI JI BANG LA love it :)
5/1/2008 c1 cel1927
xD i just realized that i havent reviewed.

i dont care if this doesnt count or not

you should make this have a happy ending D: its so sad just like this. so many questions yet none of them answered ):

or... you could make this a two-shot xD so UPDATE SOON OKAY *dingdong* i just made your decision for you :D happy ending i want happy endings! (im sure joanne does too
5/1/2008 c1 5vocecara
Hello. Liked the way you portrayed her emotions. Kind of depressing, guess you achieved what you aimed for:)

Curious though, what prompted this?

write more!
3/25/2008 c1 misery sister
Great story. So much emotion. :)

Keep it up with all your writing!
2/28/2008 c1 4l337 r0cX3r
So sad but so true for some many people...

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