Just In
for Relax

3/29/2008 c1 ffffffffffffffffffffffff
Wow. You've done an absolutely fantastic job of establishing a mood in this poem. Great job, I felt every word.
3/1/2008 c1 91fairytale failure
I really like the mood in this poem, and some of the lines were beautiful - 'Even if it is only contentment/can we invent our own form of happiness?' The stanza starting 'Slow down love, slow down' was my favourite. I don't think the attempt at rhythm/rhyme scheme works very well, though. The lines have differing lengths, which makes it difficult to pick up on the rhymes.
2/29/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
I really like the Slow down love, slow down stanza. But, as far as meaning for your input I feel it meanders.
2/29/2008 c1 61Dani P
pretty good. simple. but good. i like it.
2/29/2008 c1 Kyuubixx
This was really good!

Keep up the good work!

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