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3/21/2019 c4 zagato
This is a great story but I thought it was complete.
10/27/2012 c1 Guest
I read "Mountain Angel" and "Summer Angel" and they are amazing. I'm anxiously waiting for Luke's love story ("Wild Angel") and wanted to know if you had a deadline of that story? And also if there will be a sibling for Luke? :)
You are a talented writer, keep writing,
XOXO,
BoysInBooksAreAlwausBetter
Waiting for "Wild Angel"
9/5/2011 c22 Inseparable212
I really enjoyed reading your story, I couldn't stop reading it! I liked your style of writing and I really loved the characters! Once agaiin, amazing story! :D
4/9/2010 c1 2toujoursmoi
Dude...I just about finished this story the day before you took it off and i am soo lucky that i actually got to finish this story.

You are an amazing writer and i think that publishing this can be a real posibility. However you have to be prepared for the downs that you are most likely going to bwe invovled in. I wish you the best of luck and i certainly think you deserve your work published.

This story is quite different. It is refreshingly original.

I think that Aeli does not have enough flaws. I am certain that people as strong as Aeli do exist however on paper it does not seem too realistic.

June...she is quite an awesome charchter to have around, though i think that for her to be that wise she should have had some of her own drama in the past. Maybe she had a bad childhood or something, becuase people arent just magically wise and like June. I understand that teh secound book may address these points about June however we need some of it in teh first book just to make some sense of everything.

I reckon we should probably see more of the grandparents. I don't think there is enough detail to them.

Your faith in love is represented into you story and it is quite amazing that you think Love is really that powerful. I think that love may actually be that powerful at times but for Adam to just turn around, i don't know. You have to have more reason for him too change and we need more deatail about his blossoming relationship, with amber.

I understand that this story is mostly about Pat and Aeli but all this sorrounding carchters really mold their story into soemthing special and you have to get all these deatails in and perfect it for this to be spectacular and spectacluar is what it can be.

Sorry for all the typos and splling mistakes. I hope you don't take offense by what i said.

You have got allot of work ahead of you but i am confident that you will get there in the end.

Amaizing story, i enjoyed it greatly.

Keep me posted on you publishing journey and i will help if i can and if you need it.

Keep up the awesome work.

M
12/29/2009 c22 1MiLiNA
I don't usually review when I like a story, just add it to my favorites list but this story is incredible! I saw it on someone's favorite list and I saw that it only had 55 reviews and was very long so I decided to check the reviews out and I gotta agree w/ everyone else. This story is so amazing and beautiful. W/ all the heartache and joys it brought, I don't think anyone could have written it any better. You should seriously think of publishing. I loved it. Now I wanna read the other sequels you have to this one but my problem is I can't start reading an incomplete fic b/c if I get into it too much, and its never finished, I had being disappointed. Anyways, great fic! Loved it
8/8/2009 c22 TemptedByLaNuit
*smiles*

I absolutely LOVED this story! :D Fantastic job, absolutely fantastic. Not only shall I officially be adding this to my favorites list, I shall be handing the link over to a friend of mine. I'm sure she'll love it as much as I do. :D
7/12/2009 c22 AJ southern
too cute!
6/3/2009 c22 2minor5chord
Wow. I read this all the way through and it took some time to do! You did a wonderful job on this story-barely any grammatical mistakes, great storyline, and really believable characterizations. This is just as good (if not better) than some of the books I buy in stores, and it's obvious you put a lot of work into it. Congratulations!
3/11/2009 c1 29chepchumba
i love the story, especially the depth of your characters, you should have it published if you haven't already, it just the kind of story i wouldn't mind buying is it were on a shelf.
12/22/2008 c22 thenighting-gale
you have to know you are epically awesome. this is a must read for everyone, it was adorable, and reminded me of a trashy romance novel, which is perfect. it was light hearted even while it was dramatic, and i'm glad i found it. keep writing! i'd love to see you published some day.
12/21/2008 c4 thenighting-gale
well i had intended to only say this makes me feel like i'm reading a 'smarmy romance novel' but then adam showed up! ahh! must keep reading!
12/21/2008 c5 no.torrie.ous
Well, it could just be how good Pat looks in his jeans.. (he he) but I hear George Straits - Lets Fall to Pieces Together in my mind at the end of this chapter ;)
12/21/2008 c4 no.torrie.ous
Dude.. ok... so .. I told myself I would close this thing and go to bed once I finished chapter 4. ... and then the last few paragraphs shot that all to hell. hahaha curse you... its nearly 1 am. ;) I'm sucked in!
12/15/2008 c14 8CrazyCowgirl101
I love this story! Seriously, its really good! I haven't picked up many mistakes, just typos, but we all have a few of those! Once again, this is great so far, you had me from the begining.
12/15/2008 c22 2Inea Sako
Yay! Sweet and fluffy :D
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