for I'd Rather Bleed Than Cry3/1/2008 c1 
2Parliament Of Whores
Usually poetry like this annoys me, but I think you carried off the rhyming pretty well. As a whole, I think the poem could would be better if it were a bit longer.
Keep writing.
2Parliament Of WhoresUsually poetry like this annoys me, but I think you carried off the rhyming pretty well. As a whole, I think the poem could would be better if it were a bit longer.
Keep writing.