for The Green Hall1/14/2016 c1 
4Ibbit
This was very gross and weirdly sad and I don't know how to feel about the fact that I liked it. I have no constructive comments, for lack of words at the story.
~ibbit
4IbbitThis was very gross and weirdly sad and I don't know how to feel about the fact that I liked it. I have no constructive comments, for lack of words at the story.
~ibbit
1/30/2015 c1 lostlamb
That was completely messed up, but I can’t deny I kind of liked it. Kenny and
That was completely messed up, but I can’t deny I kind of liked it. Kenny and
11/7/2014 c1 Guest
it feels like my soul died a little...a lot
it feels like my soul died a little...a lot
8/14/2014 c1 LateNightTurtle
Oh my god.. what a dark and depressing story but I love it so much. I love EVERYTHING you write. This was just.. strange yet amazing. Thanks for a good story. (:
- Diana
Oh my god.. what a dark and depressing story but I love it so much. I love EVERYTHING you write. This was just.. strange yet amazing. Thanks for a good story. (:
- Diana
7/1/2013 c1 4ShadowJunkie
This is so depressing I don't know what to think...so...one definite thing though...I love you, man. You just got me tied around your finger like a fucking red thread. Dark, beautiful cruelty. Wish you would've made so much more. You're like a dark angel. Want it.
4ShadowJunkieThis is so depressing I don't know what to think...so...one definite thing though...I love you, man. You just got me tied around your finger like a fucking red thread. Dark, beautiful cruelty. Wish you would've made so much more. You're like a dark angel. Want it.
12/25/2012 c1 allancaldera
Your style of writing is so different than the others in a dark beautiful way.
Your style of writing is so different than the others in a dark beautiful way.
6/4/2012 c1 Anonymous Homicidal Popstar
I like it. His suicide made me sad, though. Anyway, I still like it- no, love it. The first really dark slash story that I read here, so thank you, I needed to find at least one of those.
I like it. His suicide made me sad, though. Anyway, I still like it- no, love it. The first really dark slash story that I read here, so thank you, I needed to find at least one of those.
1/8/2012 c1 a human
Christ that was entrancing. I couldn't look away for a second. You capture and keep, dear, you really do.
Christ that was entrancing. I couldn't look away for a second. You capture and keep, dear, you really do.
7/31/2011 c1 the0z3452
wow. you never fail to amaze me. why in the world have you stopped writing! the entire story was so depressing and beautiful. i love how kenny doesnt beat up trevor because he admits to himself that he loves trevor. this was so heartbreaking and wonderful. it makes me sad that kenny became this, even more of a, horrible person.
but i loved it.
wow. you never fail to amaze me. why in the world have you stopped writing! the entire story was so depressing and beautiful. i love how kenny doesnt beat up trevor because he admits to himself that he loves trevor. this was so heartbreaking and wonderful. it makes me sad that kenny became this, even more of a, horrible person.
but i loved it.
7/23/2011 c1 1TomatoesAndPasta
This is sick, so fucked up. The sick minds of two fucked up boys.
I like the way this is written, it's so far from all those sweet little fluff stories, even tho I do enjoy such stories too.
You made the whole story realistic and enjoyable to read in all its sickness. You describe well and are a really good author. Keep up the good work!
1TomatoesAndPastaThis is sick, so fucked up. The sick minds of two fucked up boys.
I like the way this is written, it's so far from all those sweet little fluff stories, even tho I do enjoy such stories too.
You made the whole story realistic and enjoyable to read in all its sickness. You describe well and are a really good author. Keep up the good work!
2/16/2011 c1 infinitemiriam
This was the very first story i'd read on fictionpress :) I like the whole story, both of them looked like suffering a blue youth and they chose how to end up themselves. The obsession of Trevor's note is still lingering in my mind.
The end could be not satisfied yet with some people, but i love it anyway.
This was the very first story i'd read on fictionpress :) I like the whole story, both of them looked like suffering a blue youth and they chose how to end up themselves. The obsession of Trevor's note is still lingering in my mind.
The end could be not satisfied yet with some people, but i love it anyway.
10/11/2010 c1 3whitefear
Like god. I liked it. So sadistic so morbib so hippie so violent so real. I love it. I love Kenny C. I love Trevor D. Like hell. They are perfect. I almost cried ugh. Poorkid that got fucked though. He didn't know shit. :/ I miss Trevor already. I can somehow on some freaky level really relate to him. god. So good. :)
3whitefearLike god. I liked it. So sadistic so morbib so hippie so violent so real. I love it. I love Kenny C. I love Trevor D. Like hell. They are perfect. I almost cried ugh. Poorkid that got fucked though. He didn't know shit. :/ I miss Trevor already. I can somehow on some freaky level really relate to him. god. So good. :)
12/21/2009 c1 Y
Woops. meant to say Kenny was such a sweetheart towards the end with trevor.
Woops. meant to say Kenny was such a sweetheart towards the end with trevor.