8/12/2009 c5 11morticiansdaughter13
i like this story...but i dont like how u skipped some parts and then just said that shes living on welfare and all...it is a very good story, tho!

3/25/2008 c5 4e.brooks
NAWH!

How...ugh! Men. Rofl.

Ooh please don't just count on review numbers! Who cares how many reviews you get? We like it!

Sorry if sound BLAH but I'm in a very blunt mood today ^_^

Peace x

3/25/2008 c5 gummybearmurder
That was terribly depressing, but probably the most realistic thing that could've happened, in the end.

3/6/2008 c1 22groovacious
If only guys were really like that...anyways I like how you talked about pregnancy and the issue with teen pregnancy and such but it seems a bit surreal especially how Damien reacted and how not really paniced they seem. I mean I don't know about you but if I found out I was pregnant I would be...WOAH MAN, I don't even know. Anyways, keep writing.

3/6/2008 c2 1FugitiveGirl
Not incredibly original

3/5/2008 c2 4e.brooks
Cute=]

Moves a bit fast though...

But I like it=]

~Lemonz xx

3/1/2008 c1 Sweet Sugar Rupture
the topic is very interesting. you should post the whole thing.