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11/22/2008 c1 385SicksisterSam
...WOW. Just wow! This is amazing! Good stuff!

~Sammy
3/9/2008 c1 33TaraC
Your poems always have great imagery, or visual effects. This one is no exception, and you're right, this one is different. It is sad, yet hopeful. I like the symbolization of the rose, how once is was so full of life, and then later, it died..like some relationships do.

Anyways, I liked the fact that it's different from the others you've written. It's very meaningful.
3/2/2008 c1 38SassyLil'Thunderstorm
Remind me never to give YOU a flower, geze, lord knows what you'd get out of it. Just joking. Its funny how little things can spark thoughts about huge ones. I mean one little FB message from one of my friends solved pretty much all of my bs, or at least put things into perspective. With this poem you went kind of 'me' with it. ie, writing something emotional all while trying not to reveal the slighest bit of your personal business/feelings. Anyway, I love the ending. Ther are a few mistakes that i'll tell you about later, things like leaving 'ed' off of words. But yay, new poem, new poem.

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