for Strange Friendship6/18/2012 c7 yes can we
did i just realise that the two didn't use protection or what
good story by the way
did i just realise that the two didn't use protection or what
good story by the way
6/7/2008 c7 
206johansenad
OMG! Just, wow! Hope you feel beta soon, the story is going brilliantly... well it's so good there's no word for it!
206johansenadOMG! Just, wow! Hope you feel beta soon, the story is going brilliantly... well it's so good there's no word for it!
5/13/2008 c1 Nakigoe Ketsurui
This reminds me of what happened over in the UK... a gothic woman was kicked to death by some kid. And she didn't do anything wrong at all!
But it's pretty good so far.
Naki-chan
My name is Rikku.
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
For a beautiful gift to you.
This reminds me of what happened over in the UK... a gothic woman was kicked to death by some kid. And she didn't do anything wrong at all!
But it's pretty good so far.
Naki-chan
My name is Rikku.
And I Cry these Tears Of Blood
For a beautiful gift to you.
4/4/2008 c7 1x-Krys-x
wow, that was an odd jump.. just barely making out to.. screwing, totally unrealistic, but whatever. good job.
1x-Krys-xwow, that was an odd jump.. just barely making out to.. screwing, totally unrealistic, but whatever. good job.
4/3/2008 c7 1Gracie-Lullabelle-Mae
wow...that was a tad on the...*ahem* warm side. Jus to say i DO NOT believe in that b4 marriage, but hey, its your story! please update soon!
1Gracie-Lullabelle-Maewow...that was a tad on the...*ahem* warm side. Jus to say i DO NOT believe in that b4 marriage, but hey, its your story! please update soon!
4/3/2008 c7 1Jevanminx
WOW, nicely written. Not too fast but not slow either when writing that. Well done.
JM
1JevanminxWOW, nicely written. Not too fast but not slow either when writing that. Well done.
JM
4/3/2008 c5 Wednesday Luigi Tomato
OMG. THIS IS THE BEST NEW STORY I HAVE CHANCED TO READ IN A VERY LONG TIME. PLEASE CONTINUE.
OMG. THIS IS THE BEST NEW STORY I HAVE CHANCED TO READ IN A VERY LONG TIME. PLEASE CONTINUE.
4/2/2008 c6 LoneWolf-234
OMG! so awsomefull ^.^ srry i didnt review the chapter before just wanted to get to this one lol cant wait for more
OMG! so awsomefull ^.^ srry i didnt review the chapter before just wanted to get to this one lol cant wait for more
4/2/2008 c2 Rhiannon
I love the premise of this story, similar to many others but it appears to have a depth to it. Before I go on to read the rest I just wanted to comment on this chapter because there was something that bothered me about it. It was a little repetative in the "face grew hot/hotter" department. You should have tried to fine another way of saying it, "I felt more embarrassed", "I felt myself get redder" etc or try to reference to it as much throughout. Other than that it was really good and I look forward to reading the rest!
I love the premise of this story, similar to many others but it appears to have a depth to it. Before I go on to read the rest I just wanted to comment on this chapter because there was something that bothered me about it. It was a little repetative in the "face grew hot/hotter" department. You should have tried to fine another way of saying it, "I felt more embarrassed", "I felt myself get redder" etc or try to reference to it as much throughout. Other than that it was really good and I look forward to reading the rest!
4/2/2008 c3 ryan
This story is great! Very well written. I loved the third chapter it was perfect. Too bad she ran away from him. :(
This story is great! Very well written. I loved the third chapter it was perfect. Too bad she ran away from him. :(
4/2/2008 c6 1Jevanminx
Aw that boy is so stupid. He was drunk, so not a good enough excuse, the silly silly boy.
JM
1JevanminxAw that boy is so stupid. He was drunk, so not a good enough excuse, the silly silly boy.
JM
4/2/2008 c5 Jevanminx
How could he damn it, oh my god, he he, Daniel was such a. I cant even explain it. I liked the comment at the end mabe by Kate though, it was nice, if not horrible at the same time.
JM
How could he damn it, oh my god, he he, Daniel was such a. I cant even explain it. I liked the comment at the end mabe by Kate though, it was nice, if not horrible at the same time.
JM