
3/4/2008 c2 XCrazyxChickX
wow, this story is really good, at least you don't wait about 6 chapters before something happens, like other stories, so go you.
wow, this story is really good, at least you don't wait about 6 chapters before something happens, like other stories, so go you.
3/4/2008 c2
1Jevanminx
Oh that was so sad, I will definitly continue reading and thankyou for replying to my review. What is with that long cut, it sounded horrible.
JM

Oh that was so sad, I will definitly continue reading and thankyou for replying to my review. What is with that long cut, it sounded horrible.
JM
3/4/2008 c2
1x-Krys-x
This is really interesting so far, I really like the plot. You have a few spelling / grammatical issues, but other than that you're fine. hopefully you can develope this into something deeper that i'm expecting. can't wait to read your next update!
-krys

This is really interesting so far, I really like the plot. You have a few spelling / grammatical issues, but other than that you're fine. hopefully you can develope this into something deeper that i'm expecting. can't wait to read your next update!
-krys
3/3/2008 c2
29Rynx-too-genki
Totally cute! I can't wait for the next chapter! He's kind of like a ababy though. I hope he grows a spine soon. (No offense. Seriously!) I think it'd be pretty hard to date someone who acts like your kid brother.
Update soon!

Totally cute! I can't wait for the next chapter! He's kind of like a ababy though. I hope he grows a spine soon. (No offense. Seriously!) I think it'd be pretty hard to date someone who acts like your kid brother.
Update soon!
3/2/2008 c1 SetMatchRun
really good start. I love how she saved him & then was like lets be friends lol I hope that makes sense. update soon i can't wait to read more. :-D
-em
p.s.- I
really good start. I love how she saved him & then was like lets be friends lol I hope that makes sense. update soon i can't wait to read more. :-D
-em
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