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8/3/2008 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
I like how the poem builds up the momentum(sp?) and how it kind of deflates with the doubts of the person feeling the same way. The end seems abrupt to me. But all in all, a very well written poem.
3/3/2008 c1 84tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
Aww, so sweet. It flowed really well, and I love the description. Great job, and keep writing!

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