for Dandelion12/11/2008 c1 
8Irresistible Apple
I'm impressed by the imagery and meaning you managed to pack in to just 17 syllables! Lovely.
8Irresistible AppleI'm impressed by the imagery and meaning you managed to pack in to just 17 syllables! Lovely.
8/2/2008 c1 11TragicDreams
It's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job!
11TragicDreamsIt's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job!
7/17/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Oh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it!
- Koki
10Koki EnwaiOh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it!
- Koki
6/27/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
My favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work.
Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrMy favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work.
Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer.
~Twilight Starr~
5/28/2008 c1 14Thoughtful Silence
I loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job!
-T.S.
14Thoughtful SilenceI loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job!
-T.S.
3/8/2008 c1 88Chidori Nadare
There is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job.
-C.N
88Chidori NadareThere is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job.
-C.N
3/4/2008 c1 216ygg
Love the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work!
216yggLove the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work!
3/3/2008 c1 32Dreaming Chica
Wow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
32Dreaming ChicaWow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
3/3/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
very pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece
612simpleplan13very pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece